用英语观察日记怎么写作文

January 6, 2014, Thursday, Sunny
This afternoon when I was shopping in the supermarket after school I saw a little boy crying right in the middle of the aisle. He cried so loudly that a crowd of people gathered around him. The boy was about three or four years old, with tears on his face. An old lady said, "The boy must be lost. Where is his mother?" I walked to him and gave him a lollipop. "Let’s look for your mother!" I said. Then I took him to the service desk to make an announcement. After ten minutes, his mother arrived. On seeing his mother the boy burst into laughter at once. I am really happy to help the boy although I was blamed by my mother for coming home late. Just like the warm sunshine, helping others makes me feel warm.

㈡ 鑻辨枃鏃ヨ伴樼洰鎬庝箞鍐欎綔鏂

1. 鑻辫鏃ヨ扮殑鏍煎紡

July 6 2007 It was the first day of our summer holiday. All of us were very happy. Why? Because we have one months to do things we love to do. We are free.Although we have some homework. But we can finish them in several days. And the rest time we can make good use of. My god! We have been very tired after hard studying. In winter holidays, I want to have full sleepand eat good food in order to replenish myself. Last but not the least, I will have a good rest. 杩欐槸绗涓澶╋紝鎴戜滑鐨勬殤鍋囥

鎴戜滑澶у堕兘闈炲父楂樺叴銆備负浠涔堬紵鍥犱负鎴戜滑鏈変竴涓鏈堢殑浜嬫垜浠閮界埍鍋氱殑浜嬨

鎴戜滑寰堢┖闂.铏界劧鎴戜滑鏈変竴浜涘姛璇俱備絾鏄锛屾垜浠鍙浠ュ畬鎴愪粬浠鐨勮嫢骞插ぉ銆

鍏朵綑鐨勬椂闂存垜浠鍙浠ュソ濂藉埄鐢ㄣ傛垜鐨勪笂甯濓紒鎴戜滑宸茬粡寰堢柌鎯鍚庡緢闅惧︿範銆

鍦ㄥ啲瀛ｅ亣鏈燂紝鎴戝笇鏈涜兘鏈夊厖鍒嗙殑寰堝ソ鍚冪殑椋熺墿锛屼互琛ュ厖鑷宸便傛渶鍚庝絾骞堕潪鏈涓嶉噸瑕侊紝鎴戜細濂藉ソ浼戞伅銆

July 7 2007 It was the second day of our summer holiday. I felt good. I felt I am free. I had a lot of time to do things I like. My parents are in Zhongshan. So I live alone but I don't feel lonely. But I didn't do something special. I stayed at home and watched TV. Oh! I wrote an Englishdaily position. It was my homework. Today, I have slept for 14 hours.I thought I was very tired. It was time for dinner. I must go! I am very hungry. 杩欐槸鎴戜滑绗浜屽ぉ鐨勬殤鍋囥傛垜鎰熻夊緢濂姐

鎴戣夊緱鎴戝緢鑷鐢便傛垜鏈夊緢澶氭椂闂村仛鎴戝枩娆銆

鎴戠殑鐖舵瘝閮藉湪涓灞便傛墍浠ワ紝鎴戠嫭鑷鐢熸椿锛屼絾鎴戝苟涓嶆劅鍒板ょ嫭銆

浣嗘槸锛屾垜娌℃湁鍋氫粈涔堢壒鍒銆傛垜浣忓湪瀹堕噷鐪嬬數瑙嗐

鍣锛佹垜鍐欎簡鑻辫鏃ヨ扮粍鎴愩傝繖鏄鎴戠殑鍔熻俱

浠婂ぉ锛屾垜鐫′簡14 灏忔椂.鎴戜互涓烘垜寰堢柌鎯銆傜幇鍦ㄦ槸鍚冩櫄楗銆

鎴戝繀椤诲幓锛佹垜闈炲父娓存湜銆 July 10 2007 I am planning to spend my summer holiday on sports this year. Playing basketball is always my favourite, so some of my clas *** ates and I will form a *** all team and play basketball together. Sometimes we may have a match against some other teams and I do enjoy the sense when we win the game. 鎴戣″垝鑺辫垂鎴戞殤鍋囦綋鑲蹭粖骞淬

鎵撶鐞冩槸鎴戞渶鍠滄㈢殑锛屾墍浠ユ垜鐨勪竴浜涘悓瀛﹀拰鎴戝皢缁勫缓涓涓灏忓洟闃燂紝涓璧锋墦绡鐞冦傛湁鏃讹紝鎴戜滑鍙鑳芥湁涓浜涘叾浠栫殑姣旇禌闃熶紞鍜屾垜鍠滄㈢殑鎰熻夛紝褰撴垜浠璧浜嗚繖鍦烘瘮璧涖

July 14 2007 Today I found time was a cruel thing. Whatever man is, time always goes on. It won't stay to wait for somebody. You can't use anything to exchange time. Time is also a fair thing. Although you have a lot of money or you enjoy high reputation, time won't leave them more. Today I found I hadn't enough time. Although I have more than a-month holiday, but I found I had a lot of things to do. I had a lot of homework to do and I am essential to plete the homework as soon as I have time. 浠婂ぉ锛屾垜鍙戠幇鏃堕棿鏄涓涓娈嬪繊鐨勪簨鎯呫傛棤璁虹敺浜猴紝鎬绘槸瀵圭殑鏃堕棿銆

瀹冧笉浼氱暀涓嬫潵绛夊緟鏌愪汉銆傛偍涓嶈兘浣跨敤浠讳綍浜ゆ祦鏃堕棿銆

鏃堕棿涔熸槸涓涓鍏骞崇殑浜嬫儏銆傝櫧鐒朵綘鏈夊緢澶氶挶锛屾垨鑰呮偍浜鏈夊緢楂樼殑澹拌獕锛屾椂闂翠笉浼氱诲紑浠栦滑鏇村氥

浠婂ぉ锛屾垜鍙戠幇鎴戝凡缁忔病鏈夎冻澶熺殑鏃堕棿銆傝櫧鐒舵垜宸茬粡瓒呰繃涓涓鏈堝亣鏈燂紝浣嗘垜鍙戠幇鎴戞湁寰堝氫簨鎯呰佸仛銆

鎴戞湁寰堝氬姛璇捐佸仛锛屾垜蹇呴』瀹屾垚鐨勫姛璇惧彧瑕佹垜鏈夋椂闂淬 July 15 2007 I have rested for 10 days. In these days, I felt very bored. I didn't know to do what. Although I had a lot of things to do, I felt unfortable. I was ill because of the hot weather. I was tired, sleepy and had no strength. My parents are worried about my health. in fact, it didn't matter. I was always in the room with air-conditioner and opened it in a low temperature. So when I went out, the high temperature disagreed to me.At last, I was ill. 鎴戝凡缁忎紤鎭浜10澶┿

鍦ㄨ繖浜涙棩瀛愰噷锛屾垜瑙夊緱寰堟棤鑱娿傛垜涓嶇煡閬撳仛浠涔堛

铏界劧鎴戞湁寰堝氫簨鎯呰佸仛锛屾垜瑙夊緱涓嶈垝鏈嶃傛垜鐢熺梾鏄鍥犱负鐐庣儹鐨勫ぉ姘斻

鎴戠疮浜嗭紝鍥帮紝涔熸病鏈夊姏閲忋傛垜鐨勭埗姣嶆媴蹇冩垜鐨勫仴搴枫

浜嬪疄涓婏紝杩欏苟涓嶉噸瑕併傛垜鎬绘槸鍦ㄦ埧闂寸┖璋冩墦寮浜嗗畠鍦ㄤ綆娓┿

鍥犳わ紝褰撴垜璧颁簡鍑哄幓锛岄珮娓╀笉缁欐垜.鍦ㄦ渶鍚庯紝鎴戣铏愬緟銆 July 16 2007 It was sunny today. I was excited. I got up at a quarter to seven. I made a appointment to meet at nine o'clock. After I had my breakfast, I went to the Wanjia Market . It was hot outside. When I arrived, my friends didn't arrive. I waited for him in front of the KFC's door. I haven't seen them for a year. And in a year, we didn't e into contact with others frequently. About ten minutes left, my friends arrived one by one. After we greeted,we went to play basketball in Liwan Gymnasium. The match last for tow hours.Oh!I fill very happy today锛 杩欐槸浠婂ぉ闃冲厜鏄庡獨銆

鎴戝緢鍏村嬨傛垜寰楀埌浜嗗湪鍏鏃跺洓鍗佷簲鍒嗐

鎴戠殑浠诲懡锛屼互婊¤冻涔濈偣閽熴備箣鍚庯紝鎴戞湁鎴戠殑鏃╅愶紝鎴戝幓浜嗕竾瀹跺競鍦恒

杩欐槸鐑澶栭潰銆傚綋鎴戝埌杈撅紝鎴戠殑鏈嬪弸浠骞舵病鏈夎揪鎴愩

鎴戠瓑寰呯潃浠栧墠闈㈢殑鑲寰峰熀鐨勫ぇ闂ㄣ傛垜杩樻病鏈夌湅鍒颁粬浠涓轰竴骞淬

骞跺湪涓骞村唴锛屾垜浠娌℃湁鎺ヨЕ鍒板叾浠栦汉棰戠箒銆傜害10鍒嗛挓绂诲紑锛屾垜鐨勬湅鍙嬩滑鏉ュ埌涓涓鍙堜竴涓銆

鍦ㄦ垜浠杩庢帴锛屾垜浠鍘绘墦鐞冭崝婀句綋鑲查嗐傝繖銆

2. 鑻辫鏃ヨ板拰浣滄枃璇ユ庝箞鍐

鑻辫鏃ヨ帮紝鏃ユ湡鏍忕殑鏈堜唤涓庢槦鏈燂紝鍥犱负缁忓父閲嶈嗙殑鍏崇郴锛屽父浠ョ缉涓庝唬鏇匡紝濡侸anuary 1st, Sunday 灏卞彲鍐欐垚Jan. 1 , Sun. 鎴朣un., Jan. 1 銆 鍚庨潰鍔犱笂姘斿欏栧喌锛屽侰loudy锛堥槾锛夈乺ainy锛堥洦锛 銆亀indy锛堥庯級銆乧ool锛堝噳鐖斤級绛夌瓑銆

鑻辨枃鏃ヨ版湁鎺ュ啓鍙婁竴椤电瘒涓ょ嶄富瑕佸舰寮忥紝濡傛灉姝ｅ紡涓鐐圭殑锛屽垯浼氬湪鏃ユ湡鏍忎笌鍐呮枃涔嬮棿鍔犱笂棰樼洰銆

澶氬弬鐓у悕瀹跺啓娉曪紝澶氱（缁冨啓浣滄妧宸э紝浣犲氨鑳藉湪姣忓ぉ鍐欒嫳鏂囨棩璁扮殑涔犳儻涓锛屽皢浣滄枃鑳藉姏鏃犲舰涓鎻愭悶銆傚洜涓烘棩璁扮殑鐢ㄥ瓧绮剧畝锛屽彇鏉愬懆骞匡紝鑰屼笖浜轰汉鐨嗘槸鎻愮瑪灏卞啓锛屾湁璇濈洿璇达紝涓嶅儚鍐欎功淇°佹枃绔狅紝杩樻湁鍙鑳藉厛鎵撹崏绋匡紝鍐嶅啓銆

涓銆佷綔鏂囪佸︿細绉绱

鈥滆讳功鐮翠竾鍗凤紝涓嬬瑪濡傛湁绁炩濓紝鈥滃阀濡囬毦涓烘棤绫充箣鐐娾濆彜浜鸿繖浜涙荤粨锛屼粠姝ｅ弽涓ゆ柟闈㈣存槑浜嗏滅Н绱鈥濆湪鍐欎綔涓鐨勯噸瑕佹с傗滃钩鏃堕潬绉绱锛岃冨満鍑鍙戞尌鈥濓紝杩欐槸鑰冨満瀛﹀瓙鐨勫叡鍚屼綋浼氥

锛堜竴锛夎瑷鏂归潰瑕佸缓绔嬧滆姹囧簱鈥濄傝姹囨槸鏂囩珷鐨勭粏鑳炪傚箍涔夌殑璇姹囷紝涓嶄粎鎸囪瘝銆佺煭璇鐨勬绘眹锛岃繕鍖呮嫭鍙ュ瓙銆佸彞缇ゃ傚缓绔嬧滆姹囧簱鈥濋斿緞鏈変簩锛氱涓鏄闃呰汇傚钩鏃惰佸箍娉涢槄璇讳功绫嶃佹姤鍒婏紝骞跺仛濂借讳功绗旇帮紝鎶婁竴浜涗紭缇庣殑璇嶈銆佸彞瀛愩佽娈垫憳褰曞湪鐗瑰畾鐨勬湰瀛愪笂锛屼篃鍙浠ュ埗浣滆讳功鍗＄墖涓娿傜浜屾槸鐢熸椿銆傚钩鏃惰佹崟鎹夊ぇ浼楀彛璇涓椴滄椿鐨勮瑷锛屽苟鎶婅繖浜涜瑷璁板湪闅忚韩甯︾殑灏忔湰瀛愭垨鍗＄墖涓婏紝杩欐牱鏃ョН鏈堢疮銆侀泦鑵嬫垚瑁橈紝璇磋瘽 灏辫兘鍑哄彛鎴愮珷锛屼綔鏂囧氨浼氬欑瑪鐢熻姳銆

锛堜簩锛夎佸姞寮烘潗鏂欐柟闈㈢殑绉绱銆傛潗鏂欐槸鏂囩珷鐨勮鑲夈傝稿氬︾敓鐢变簬骞虫椂涓嶆敞鎰忕Н绱绱犳潗锛屾瘡鍒颁綔鏂囨椂灏卞幓鎼滆偁鎸傝倸锛屾垨鑰呰儭缂栨垨鑰

3. 鎬庝箞鍐欒嫳鏂囨棩璁

杩欎釜鏄鎴戝垵涓鏃跺欐斁鍋囪佸笀鐣欑殑鏃ヨ伴噷鍐欑殑锛岀◢寰鏀逛簡涓涓嬶紝绗涓绡囧啓鐨勬槸鏈夊叧鑷宸变负濂ヨ繍浼氭崘闆惰姳閽辩殑浜嬶紝搴旇ュ嶅悎浣犵殑瑕佹眰 绗涓绡 My savings-box 鎴戠殑瀛橀挶缃 I had a baby pig.It was a lovely one.It was as white as snow and with red patterns on its back.It was so fat that it looked like a ball.It had a big mouth and a *** all nose.Its tail was very short.It had four strong leds.Oh,I fot to tell you that there was a hole on锛堟垨鑰呮槸鐢╥n鎴戜篃涓嶅お纭瀹氾級its back.So it was not a real pig but a savings-box. I like my little"pig" very much and often fed it with my pocket money as food.The pig was very *** iling銆

It seemed to be saying thanks to me in return.The pig was heavier and heavier,at last,it was full of money. One day,I was very sad to break the pig into pieces because I was going to contribute the money to the 29th BeiJing Olympic Games. The night,I dreamed a sweet dream,the money I had saved was sent to BEIJING 绗浜岀瘒 鍐欏緱鏄鍘荤粰濂跺ザ杩囩敓鏃ョ殑浜 涔熷緢澶嶅悎瀹為檯 It was Grandma"s锛堝簲璇ユ槸涓涓鎾囷紝鎴戞墦涓嶅嚭鏉ワ級birthday銆侳ather,mother and I went to visit her.She lives with my uncle in a villagenot too far away.Early in the morning we brought some presents and took the bus to get there Grandma and uncle were so glad to see us.We gave the presents to Grandma and she was so happy.Then wo sat down to talk,while tncle prepare lunch. The meal was so nice that we all enjoyed it very much. At 4 o"锛堣繕鏄涓涓鎾囷級clock,we said goodbye and returned 鑻辨枃鎵撶潃鎬鍒鎵锛屽彲鑳芥湁鐨勫崟璇嶆湁鐐归敊璇瘇涓瀹氳侀夋垜鐨勫晩锛屾垜鎵撲簡鍗婂ぉ浜嗭紝鎬佷笉瀹规槗鍟~銆

4. 鍐欎竴绡囪嫳鏂囨棩璁颁负棰樼殑浣滄枃50瀛,鍒濅竴

The last children' day

The weather is so good for today is the children' day June 6th.

We go to zoo to celebrate our last children' day.

We see the elephant, which is the biggest animal on the land. It is so big and so friendly.

And we also see the Giraffe. It is a timid animal and its neck is very long.

We have a good time in the whole afternoon at zoo.

5. 姹10绡囪嫳璇鏃ヨ板拰5绡囪嫳璇浣滄枃

鏃ヨ帮細1.July 5th Monday cloudyToday I came back from a place named 鈥渉e chuan鈥, it's a good place. There has some nice view like chang jiang river. I came there in o days ago. Our aunt is here. We had a good time in there. But I also write English dairy too. Because of the wrong puter, the message didn't here. I wish myself to live more better tomorrow.7鏈5鍙 鏄熸湡涓 澶氫簯浠婂ぉ鎴戜粠涓涓鍚嶅彨鈥滃悎宸濃濈殑鍦版柟鍥炴潵锛岃繖鏄涓涓濂藉湴鏂广

鏈変竴浜涚編涓界殑娌虫祦锛屽氨鍍忛暱姹熸渤娴併傛垜鏄鍦ㄤ袱澶╁墠鍒伴偅閲岀殑銆

鍥犱负鎴戠殑濮ㄥ堝湪杩欎釜鍦版柟銆傛垜浠鐜╃殑寰堝紑蹇冦

浣嗘垜涔熷啓浜嗘垜鐨勫亣鏈熻嫳璇鏃ヨ般傚洜涓鸿＄畻鏈哄嚭閿欎簡锛岃繖鏉℃秷鎭娌℃湁鍦ㄨ繖閲屻

鎴戝笇鏈涜嚜宸辨槑澶╄兘鐢熸椿寰楁洿缇庡ソ銆2.July 6th Tuesday cloudyAh ha, when I get up, it was time for lunch. But I really have a lot of work to do, I must write words English dairy, then learned 鈥淟i yang鈥 English, then 鈥︹ .Oh, my god, if I do it in the afternoon, I will ready to dead. So I wrote words, now I'm writing my English dairy. Wish I could finish these works today. Bye!7鏈6鍙 鏄熸湡浜 澶氫簯鍝堝搱锛屽綋鎴戣捣搴婄殑鏃跺欙紝鍒氬ソ鍒颁簡鍗堥愭椂闂淬

浣嗘垜鐪熺殑鏈夊緢澶氬伐浣滆佸仛锛屾垜蹇呴』鍐欏崟璇嶏紝鐒跺悗瀛︿範"鏉庨槼鐤鐙傝嫳璇"锛岀劧鍚庘︹﹀摝锛屾垜鐨勪笂甯濓紝濡傛灉鎴戣佷竴鐩村仛鍒颁笅鍗堬紝鎴戠湡鐨勫揩姝讳簡銆傚洜姝ゆ垜鍦ㄥ啓鍗曡瘝锛屽啓鎴戠殑鑻辨枃鏃ヨ般

甯屾湜鎴戣兘瀹屾垚浠婂ぉ杩欎簺浠诲姟銆傚啀瑙佷簡锛3.July 9th Friday sunnyHow happy I am. Yesterday I finished all the work very quick, so I have a lot of time to do myself. Sometimes finish work early is a good thing, we can have more interests to do the next work. Because of this, I write English dairy eight in the morning. But I wrote it in the evening in the pass day. Everyone, if you can finish the work quickly, not lazy, try your best.7鏈9鏃 鏄熸湡浜 闃冲厜鎴戞湁澶氫箞鐨勯珮鍏淬

鏄ㄥぉ鎴戝緢蹇瀹屾垚浜嗘墍鏈夌殑宸ヤ綔锛屾墍浠ユ垜鏈夊緢澶氭椂闂寸敤鏉ヨ嚜宸卞垎閰嶃傛湁鏃舵彁鍓嶅畬鎴愬︿範浠诲姟鏄浠跺ソ浜嬶紝鎴戜滑浼氭湁鏇村氱殑鍏磋叮鍘诲仛涓嬩竴浠朵簨鎯呫

姝ｅ洜涓哄傛わ紝鎴戝啓鑻辫鏃ヨ伴兘鏄鍦ㄦ棭涓婂叓鐐广備絾鍦ㄨ繃鍘荤殑鏅氫笂鎴戣繕鏄瑕佸湪鏅氫笂鍐欍

浠讳綍浜猴紝濡傛灉浣犺兘瀹屾垚杩欓」宸ヤ綔寰楀緢蹇锛屼笉瑕佸伔鎳掞紝灏借嚜宸辨渶澶х殑鍔鍔涖4.July 12th Monday sunnyHow tired am I! I went back from chongqing three hours ago. In the city I nearly lost the way. Thanks for the hot heart man woman. They help us to find the way. Oh, don't think so badly, I'm fine. Because of my hard, my homepage is more beautiful than before, I'm very happy to see it. I love make homepage, if you love it, please let me know, we can take hours talking about homepage. Thank you.7鏈12鏃 鏄熸湡涓 闃冲厜鎴戝ソ绱鍟婏紒鎴戜粠閲嶅簡鍥炴潵宸茬粡鏈変笁灏忔椂浜嗐

鍦ㄥ煄閲屾垜宸鐐硅糠璺銆傝阿璋㈢儹蹇冧汉锛屼粬浠甯鍔╂垜浠鎵惧埌浜嗚矾銆

鍣锛屼笉瑕佷互涓哄緢绯熺硶锛屾垜寰堝ソ銆傚洜涓烘垜鐨勫姫鍔涳紝鎴戠殑涓婚〉姣斾互鍓嶆洿婕備寒浜嗭紝鎴戝緢楂樺叴鐪嬪埌瀹冨彉鎴愯繖鏍枫

鎴戠埍缃戦〉锛屽傛灉浣犵埍瀹冿紝璇疯╂垜鐭ラ亾锛屾垜浠鍙浠ヨ姳鍑犱釜灏忔椂璋堣轰富椤点傝阿璋浣犮

5.July 14th Wednesday rainy Yesterday I came to the center of Chongqing with my mother. We came to a place named 鈥渢oward the air door鈥. I think many people know it. The night view is so beautiful that we all don't want to back to home. I have a photo here. In the nine, we had to go back home. I didn't wash my face before I went to bed, I'm too tired. 7鏈1鏃 鏄熸湡涓 涓嬮洦鏄ㄥぉ鎴戞潵鍒伴噸搴嗗競涓蹇冨拰濡堝堝湪涓璧枫傛垜浠鏉ュ埌涓涓鍦版柟锛屽悕鍙鈥滃悜绌轰腑闂ㄢ濄

鎴戞兂寰堝氫汉鐭ラ亾銆傜編涓界殑澶滄櫙璁╂垜浠閮戒笉鎯冲洖瀹躲

鎴戣繖杈规湁寮犵収鐗囥傛櫄涓9鐐癸紝鎴戜滑涓嶅緱涓嶅洖瀹躲

鎴戞病娲楄劯灏变笂搴婄潯瑙変簡锛屾垜澶绱浜嗐6.July 16th Friday rainyThis holiday is my best busy holiday for I am learning English, puter word I fall in the weekend exam. Many times I want to take today off, my mother said to me:鈥済o on, you must belive that you can do it.鈥 So I have to try. Now my English is better than 2months ago. I must thanks my mother, she is good for me. Practices makes perfect.7鏈16鏃 鏄熸湡浜 闃撮洦杩欎釜鍋囨湡鏄鎴戞渶濂界殑绻佸繖鐨勮妭鏃ワ紝鍥犱负鎴戝湪鍛ㄦ湯鑰冭瘯娌¤冨ソ锛屾墍浠ユ垜瀛︿範鑻辫鍜岃＄畻鏈哄崟璇嶃

璁稿氭★紝鎴戞兂鏀惧純浠婂ぉ鐨勫︿範锛屽堝堝规垜璇达細鈥滅户缁锛屼綘鐩镐俊浣犺兘鍋氬埌銆"鎵浠ユ垜涓嶈兘涓嶈瘯涓璇曘

鐜板湪鎴戠殑鑻辫姣2涓鏈堝墠濂藉緱澶氥傛垜瑕佹劅璋㈡垜鐨勫堝堬紝濂瑰规垜寰堝ソ銆

瀹炶返鎵嶈兘杈惧埌瀹岀編銆7.July 21th Wednesday rainyGood morning everyone, I have some good news some bad news. The good news is that I have a home page: how happy am I. The bad news is the puter game cd-rom is wrong. I can't play puter game these days. It's the worse for me. Wele to my homepage I wish whom could give me a right cd-rom(you are in sleep).hen hen鈥︹7鏈21鏃 鏄熸湡涓 涓嬮洦 澶у舵棭涓婂ソ锛屾垜鏈変竴浜涘ソ娑堟伅涓浜涘潖娑堟伅銆

濂芥秷鎭鏄锛屾垜鏈変竴涓涓婚〉锛屽氫箞骞哥忓晩銆傚潖娑堟伅鏄鐢佃剳娓告垙鍏夌洏鍑洪敊銆

鎴戜笉鑳界帺鐢佃剳娓告垙锛岃繖浜涘ぉ銆傚お绯熶簡銆

娆㈣繋鍏変复鎴戠殑涓婚〉甯屾湜璋佽兘缁欐垜涓涓姝ｇ‘鐨勫厜鐩橈紙浣犳ｅ湪鐫¤夆︹︼級銆8.July 22th 銆

6. 鑻辫鏃ヨ版牸寮忔庝箞鍐 鏍囧噯鑻辨枃鏃ヨ版牸寮忚寖鏂

鑻辫鏃ヨ版牸寮忕殑鏍囧噯 锛氭棩璁板綋澶╃殑鏃ユ湡浼氬啓鍦ㄥ乏涓婅掞紝鏄熸湡鍜屾椂闂寸殑椤哄簭鍜屾櫘閫氱殑淇′欢涓鑷达紝鍦ㄥ彸涓婅掍細鏍囨敞褰撳ぉ鐨勫ぉ姘旀儏鍐碉紝琛ㄧず鐨勮瘝璇涓鑸涓哄舰瀹硅瘝銆

閫氬父鏉ヨ达紝鍐欐棩璁扮殑鏃堕棿鏄鍦ㄤ笅鍗堛佹櫄涓婏紝鎴栬呭湪绗浜屽ぉ璁板綍鍓嶄竴澶╃殑鏃ヨ帮紝鎵浠ュ湪璁板綍鏃朵細鐢ㄨ繃鍘诲紡鏉ヨ〃绀猴紝浣嗗湪璁板綍澶╂皵鏃舵垨鑰呭皢鏉ヨ佸仛鐨勪簨鎯呮椂锛岄渶瑕佺敤鍒扮幇鍦ㄦ椂鎴栧皢鏉ユ椂锛岃嚦浜庡叾浠栫殑鍐欎綔鏂规硶鍜屼腑鏂囩殑鏃ヨ颁竴鏍枫 鑻辫鏃ヨ版牸寮忕殑鑼冩湰 January 18, 2011 Friday Sunny I'm free now, because I'm in the winter vacation. Although I have some homework, I can finish them in a few days. There's plenty of time to rest and use. My god! After hard study, I have been very tired. In the winter vacation, I want to have enough sleep and a lot of delicious food to reward myself. Last but not least, I will have a good rest. I have rested for a week, then began to feel bored. So I went out with my friends. They are my best friends in the middle school. We didn't go to a special place, we just had lunch together. While we were having lunch, we were still talking about the new school and new friends. One year later, we will bee mature. We will learn more things, get a new life, but we do not have enough time to play, waste and lose. We only have o years. In o years, we will get really for our own life which only belongs to ourselves.璇烽噰绾炽

7. 鑻辨枃鏃ヨ版庝箞鍐欙紙鍐欎綔鏂规硶锛

鏄熸湡鍜屾棩鏈熷啓鍦ㄥ乏涓婅掞紝澶╂皵鍐欏湪鍙充笂瑙

鏃ユ湡鏍煎紡鐢ㄦ湀鏃ュ勾锛堢編寮忥級鎴栨棩鏈堝勾锛堣嫳寮忥級閮藉彲浠

1. 骞淬佹湀銆佹棩閮藉啓鏃讹紝閫氬父浠ユ湀銆佹棩銆佸勾涓洪『搴忥紝鏈堜唤鍙浠ョ缉鍐欙紝鏃ュ拰骞寸敤閫楀彿闅斿紑銆備緥濡傦細December 18, 2003鎴栬匘ec. 18, 2003銆

2. 濡傛灉瑕佸啓鏄熸湡锛屾槦鏈熻佺揣鎸ㄦ棩鏈燂紝瀹冩棦鍙浠ユ斁鍦ㄦ棩鏈熷墠闈锛屼篃鍙浠ユ斁鍦ㄦ棩鏈熷悗闈锛屾槦鏈熶篃鍙浠ョ渷鐣ヤ笉鍐欍傛槦鏈熷拰鏃ユ湡涔嬮棿涓嶇敤鏍囩偣锛屼絾瑕佺┖涓鏍硷紝鏄熸湡涔熷彲缂╁啓銆備緥濡傦細Thursday Dec. 18, 2003鎴朌ec.18,2003 Thursday

3. 澶╂皵鎯呭喌蹇呬笉鍙灏戙傚ぉ姘斾竴鑸鐢ㄤ竴涓褰㈠硅瘝濡傦細Sunny, Fine, Rainy, Snowy绛夎〃绀恒傚ぉ姘旈氬父浣嶄簬鏃ヨ扮殑鍙充笂瑙掋

8. 姹備竴绡囪嫳璇鏃ヨ拌寖鏂

瑕佸﹀ソ鍐欒嫳璇鐭鏂囷紝灏卞繀椤荤粡甯哥粌涔犲啓浣溿

璁版棩璁版槸鎻愰珮涔﹂潰琛ㄨ揪鑳藉姏鐨勬湁鏁堟柟娉曚箣涓銆傛棩璁版槸姣忔棩鐢熸椿鐨勮拌浇锛屾槸涓绉嶈颁簨鏂囦綋銆

涓銆佹棩璁扮殑鏍煎紡 鑻辨枃鏃ヨ伴氬父鐢变功绔鍜屾ｆ枃涓や釜閮ㄥ垎缁勬垚銆傛棩璁板父浠ョ涓浜虹О璁颁笅褰撳ぉ鐢熸椿涓鐨勬墍瑙併佹墍闂汇佹墍鍋氭垨鎵鎯崇殑浜嬫儏銆

涓銆佽嫳鏂囩殑鏃ヨ颁笁鏍煎紡澶ц嚧涓鏍枫傝嫳璇鏃ヨ扮殑涔︾鏄涓撻棬鍐欐棩璁扮殑鏃ユ湡銆佹槦鏈熷拰澶╂皵鐨勩

宸︿笂瑙掓槸鏃ユ湡锛堝勾銆佹湀銆佹棩锛夈佹槦鏈熴傚彸涓婅掑啓涓婂綋澶╃殑澶╂皵鎯呭喌锛屽傦細Sunny, Fine, Rainy, Windy, Snowy, Cloudy绛夈

1銆佹棩鏈熻〃杈炬湁澶氱嶅舰寮忋傚勾銆佹湀銆佹棩閮藉啓鏃讹紝閫氬父浠ユ湀銆佹棩銆佸勾涓洪『搴忥紝鏈堜唤鍙浠ョ缉鍐欙紝鏃ュ拰骞寸敤閫楀彿闅斿紑銆

渚嬪傦細 December 18, 2003 鎴栬 Dec. 18, 2003 A) September 1, 2004鎴朣eptember 1st, 2004涔熷彲鐪佺暐鍐欐垚Sept. 1, 2004鎴朣ept. 1st, 2004;B)the 1st of September in 2004锛堟湀浠戒笉鍙浠ョ缉鍐欙級 B锛夊彧鏈夋湀銆佹棩 September 1鎴朣eptember 1st锛堟湀浠藉彲浠ョ缉鍐欙級 C锛夊彧鏈夊勾銆佹湀 September 2004鎴杢he September of 2004锛堟湀浠戒笉鍙浠ョ缉鍐欙級 浠ヤ笂鐨1鎴1st閮藉簲璇讳綔the first銆 2.鏄熸湡涔熷彲浠ョ渷鐣ヤ笉鍐欙紝鍙灏嗗叾鏀惧湪鏃ユ湡鍓嶆垨鍚庯紝鏄熸湡鍜屾棩鏈熶箣闂翠笉鐢ㄦ爣鐐癸紝浣嗚佺┖涓鏍硷紝鏄熸湡涔熷彲缂╁啓銆

濡傦細 Saturday, October 22nd, 2004;October 22nd, 2004 Saturday 3.澶╂皵鎯呭喌蹇呬笉鍙灏戙傚ぉ姘斾竴鑸鐢ㄤ竴涓褰㈠硅瘝濡 锛歋unny, Fine, Rainy, Snowy 绛夎〃绀恒

鍐欏湪鏃ユ湡涔嬪悗锛岀敤閫楀彿闅斿紑锛屼綅浜庢棩璁扮殑鍙充笂瑙掋傚傦細Saturday, March 4, 2004, Windy;1st January, 2004, Fine 浜屻佹棩璁扮殑瑕佹眰鏃ヨ扮殑姝ｆ枃鏄鏃ヨ扮殑涓昏侀儴鍒嗭紝鍐欏湪鏄熸湡鍜屾棩鏈熺殑姝ｄ笅鏂癸紝鍙浠ラ《鏍煎啓锛屼篃鍙浠ュ唴缂3鑷5涓瀛楁瘝鐨勭┖闂淬

鐢变簬璁拌浇鐨勫唴瀹归氬父宸茬粡鍙戠敓锛岃皳璇鍔ㄨ瘝澶氱敤涓鑸杩囧幓鏃躲備絾涔熷彲鏍规嵁鍏蜂綋鎯呭喌锛岀敤鍏跺畠鏃舵併

濡傦細璁板彊澶╂皵銆佹弿鍐欐櫙鑹诧紝涓轰簡鎻忓啓鐢熷姩锛屽彲浠ヤ娇鐢ㄧ幇鍦ㄦ椂锛屼互琛ㄧ幇褰撴椂鐨勬儏鏅銆傚啀濡傛枃鍚庡彂琛ㄦ劅鎯虫垨璇勮哄彲鐢ㄧ幇鍦ㄦ椂鎬佹垨灏嗘潵鏃舵併

璁版棩璁板姏姹傜畝鍗曟槑浜嗭紝鏈夎繛璐鎬с傝嫢鏈夋枃瀛楁彁绀猴紝鍒欏簲閲嶈嗘彁绀猴紝鎶婃彙瑕佺偣銆

鍦ㄥ彞寮忎笂灏介噺浣跨敤绠鍗曞彞锛屼互闃茬箒鏉傦紝閫犳垚璇娉曘佸彞鍨嬮敊璇銆備笁銆佹棩璁扮殑绫诲瀷鍜岃缁 鏃ヨ板垎涓鸿颁簨鍨嬨佽璁哄瀷銆佹弿鍐欏瀷鍜屾姃鎯呭瀷銆

寤鸿澶у跺湪瀛︿範鍐欐棩璁扮殑杩囩▼涓锛屽彲鎸変互涓嬫ラよ繘琛岋細鈶犲皢涓澶╂墍缁忓巻鐨勪富瑕佷簨鎯呭拰杩囩▼渚濇＄畝瑕佸湴璁颁笅鏉ワ紝涓嶉檮鍔犱换浣曟劅 *** 褰╋紝杩欐槸鏈绠鍗曠殑璁版棩璁扮殑鏂规硶锛涒憽闃呰诲埆浜虹殑鏃ヨ帮紝骞跺埄鐢ㄦ墍瀛﹁繃鐨勫彞鍨嬫潵琛ㄨ揪涓浜哄湪涓澶╀腑瑙傚療鍒扮殑鎴栨劅鍙楀埌鐨勪簨鎯呫 銆愯寖鏂囦笌鐐硅瘎銆慚arch 12th, 2003, TuesdaySunny (Fine) Today is Tree Planting Day. At 7:30 in the morning, all the students in our class met at the school gate. We walked to the park. Miss Gao and other teachers went and worked with us. All the students worked very hard, and we planted about 200 trees. Though we were dirty and tired, we still felt very happy. 杩欐槸涓绡囪板彊鍨嬬殑鏃ヨ般

缁撴瀯涓ヨ皑锛屼腑蹇冪獊鍑猴紝鏈夐夋嫨鍦拌板綍褰撳ぉ鐨勮侀椈锛堜汉鎴栦簨锛夛紝骞跺姞浠ュ垎鏋愬拰璇勮恒 锛堟湜閲囩撼鍝~~~鏂板勾蹇涔愶紒锛侊紒锛夈

㈢ 英语学校旅行日记怎么写作文

1. 怎么用英语写作文（我在学校的旅行）四年级

Last summer I went to Vietnam with my parents. We stayed at a *** all village outside Saigon. The air and water was very clean and there were many kids playing in the mud along with water buffalos. Though it's a very poor country, the kids seem to be happy. They live with their farmer parents in little houses built with dirt and straw and help out a lot in the rice field ring the day. They don't have TVs or Inter, but they enjoy a lot playing outside. It was a very memorable trip that I will never fet.。

2. 英语作文旅行日记

1、I had a wonderful time in Chongqing this vacation and it was a very happy tour!Chongqing is the biggest municipality directly under the Central Government and bulit on the mountains.The most structure I've seen there is bridge.Chongqing is surrouned by Jialing river and Changjiang river.In order to make life better and more uunicate,several districts of Chongqing are conied by many kinds of bridges of which I don't konw the English name.And the night view of Chongqing is exciting,especially in Jiefangbei.It's so beautiful that I can't describe it in words.To be frank,I dislike the weather in winter of Chongqing.It's so cold that I can't stand.In one word,I spent a unfetable time in Chongqing and I wish I could be there for the second time.

望采纳！！！！！！！！！！！！

3. 学校旅游日记 英语

Travel Diary Thursday August lst Today. It was suuny and hot all day. I went to the palace Museum. It is so long and wide and visited Tian`an Men Square. The Square is very large. There were many people there. I took some photos. Then I went to the Great wall is very long. In the afternoon. I went shopping in a Beijing Hutoing. There are different kind of shops. I bought a pair, of shoes. a jecket and other things. We had Beijing ck for dinner . It was deicious. I love Beijing ck. I was so tired but I felf very happy.Saturday, May 26 Windy Saturday again. How time flies! Another week has gone. This afternoon, I was often absent-minded in class, for I was thinking of the film "The Sound of Music", which would be shown at 7 p.m. on the school playground. As soon as class was over, I hurried out of the classroom. On the way home I saw a little child standing by the roadside crying. Obviously, he had lost his way. Fetting all about the film, I went up to him and asked him to tell me whatever he knew about his family. It took me nearly an hour to send him home. His parents were very glad to find their lost child back and thanked me again and again.。

4. 写一篇关于自己在学校旅游的英语作文70~80词（初一）

Last sunday, my parents and I went to Beijing tour.

In the morning, we take a bus to the Badaling. Imposing Great Wall stretches for thousands of miles, and then boarded the go, feel the ancient wisdom and hard work.

1:30 pm, we had lunch, and then went to the supermarket.

In the evening, happily embark on return journey.

5. 英语写学校旅行的作文不少于6.词

Last sunday. I and my father went to jiazhen. In the morning we came down the mountain. I saw wooded mountains, wild flowers bloom. We climb up the hill along the mountain path. Come halfway up the mountain, I feel a little tired,it began to rain,My West Lake silk umbrella missed,. Dad said to me,“bobs, don't do anything halfway.”at last,So I insisted reached the top, the top of the scenery so beautiful.We were flying kites, .finally we went home.finally,Since then, I've kept the umbrella。

i was very happy。

6. 以"旅游日记"为题目,写一篇英语作文（翻译）

Travelling is also one of the best means for learning. You may have read or heard about something but you can never get an accurate picture of it until you see it for yourself. Seeing is believing. Furthermore, if you area careful observer, you can learn much ring your travel about the geography, biology, and history of the places you visit. No matter how well ecated you are, there is always a lot for you to learn through travelling. The knowledge acquired from travel, as you will have found in your life, is no less valuable than that from any influential reference book.

旅行也是最好的学习方法之一。你可能看过或者听说过某些事物的报道，但只有当你亲眼看到这些事物时你才能获得准确的信息。眼见为实。此外，如果你是一个细心的观察者，在你的旅行过程中你会学到许多有关当地的地理、生物和历史方面的知识。不管你接受过多好的教育，通过旅行总是可以让你学到更多。你会发现在旅行中获得的知识在你的生活中并不比来自任何一本有影响力的参考书上的价值小。

7. 英语作文《旅行日记》

Transportation: the bus

The departure time: morning 6:40

Arrival time; "

Events: morning, boating, swimming in a *** all restaurant for lunch. Walk along the beach this afternoon to beidaihe photography

Time: 7:30 PM returns

8. 英语作文《旅游日记》100字左右

Said line to the Wuyi "not beyond the bounds of travel, equal to the white-Tour", is quite true, when my friend and I spent a pedestrian o hours before boarding to make peak travel days, I stood panting peak travel days of the List Pavilion on the lean on a railing around, mountainous Pinnacle, Sen steep rock cliffs, nine winds, the raft light swing, we know the songs Hill Rotary, peak hold water flow, Wuyishan water panoramic view, take a deep breath is open-minded, Tao Ran fet to go home. Xu said: "The river is not temporary but can make nine wins, this peak should be the first solid also," I think it was a very beautiful place Wuyi Mountain, peak travel days when the worthy, and standing on top of the roof the peak, the public view Qishanxiushui indeed together I want to always focussed on landscapes, rivers and lakes hero laughing hazy dream, carrying the body Sword sword, play a "Sword *** an", the greatest human fear is a good thing. From the noisy hustle and bustle of the city, do not think the work boring and sad life of depression, no longer like to sing that song like: "Time seems to rush the work of the machine, so I'm sleepy fatigue strength, can not afford to install happy and cheer, thinking as for the oxygen to breathe. "in the face of nature, is to fake his own, to see mountains and water, green water just singing a song often turn around the Castle 。

。, thinking about tomorrow morning's nine drift , but also filled with infinite yearning. Early the next morning When the morning mist still shrouded peaks, had the cool autumn breeze on the cheek as water, we have lined up riding on a bamboo raft, the long tap Penny boatman, cut the raft head towards me slightly cool water The river winds, can not help but close your eyes and hearts to feel fortable, not the least bit bored and depressed, not how long breathed the fresh air, and the reins are like empty spacious, was washed clean. To hear people say that before the clean water Danxia Wuyishan, the most beautiful to the number of Jiuquxi, if the peak travel days will be steep bold knight of the wind, the water that morning, *** oke Si Wu's nine nine fairy is undoubtedly a soft, bamboo raft down the river, mountains along the water stand, turn the water with the mountains, winding winding nine eighth Bay. Mountains, concealing a paradise, after the hidden bare bamboo Ziyun College, no wonder Guo poem: Limbo Origin of flight feathers light raft, not a poem will do. Raft facing the Autumn, we greet the early autumn air cool earth, in an almost romantic in the front line in Wonderland, a poem, saying: If there are annoying things in mind, is a good time to earth, I think that a good mood If the boating season and I definitely blushed than nine, very close clear stream, looked up and inserted in both sides of the cliffs after thousands of years of wind and sun ring the Guan, and that layers of the mountainous peaks one after another, occult Taoist temple in which we make long home city, really easy to feel relaxed and happy and fortable, this is the real world a good time. One after the o boatmen, while support pole and line, while to us the many beautiful legends about nine, Da Wangfeng Yunufeng beautiful love story and spread through the ages, scholar Zhu Xi, "lost time is never" the writing still vivid in their lovely eyes, every hill, every piece of strange stones according to their shape and by their characteristics, given a proper name of the people wealthy man lay critically, in their vulgar language, although we do not understand a witty sense of humor and warm, amused laughter all the way we constantly wander beeen the nine Bay has been behind the eighth. Looked back at the clear water and blue sky and white to the Castle, the heart no worries worry too clear water, many think that with the raft has been drifting down, happy world is always so short, but I remember the joy of the good treasure in the heart.。

9. 英语作文关于旅游 写日记形式的

i love travelling. when i was young, my parents always took me to other places to visit, such as beijing, zhuhai and guilin. but as i grow up, there's such a heavy study-pressure that i can hardly afford time and energy to travel. fortunately, i can “travel” to a lot of far-away attractions in the fantastic world of books and tv. recently i have learnt about rio de janeiro from books. i feel excited and want very much to travel there. rio de janeiro lies along the coast of atlantic ocean. it's brazil's second largest city. firstly, i love the climate in rio de janeiro. sea climate is fortable and it never gets too dry or too wet. secondly, i love the beautiful beaches. i always form a picture in my mind of being at the seaside. i imagine myself walking on the beach. the sunshine is mild in the late afternoon and i feel the soft wind moving across my face. i can see the sun moving slowly below the sea level, just like a hot, red ball falling into the water. some seagulls are flying above the sea and others rest themselves on ship-boards. i take off my shoes. soft sand flows through my toes. little waves sometimes run towards me and wet my trousers, just like naughty children. i enjoy this feast for both my body and spirit. now i know that the beauty of nature is the greatest beauty in the world. alone, i'm just walking, walking and walking……。

㈣ 观察植物日记英语作文五十词

Plants are very important living things.Life could not go on if there were no plants.This is because plants can make food from air,water and sunlight.Animals and man cannot do so.Animals get their food by eating plants and other animals.Man gets his food by eating plants and animals,too.Therefore,animals and man need plants in order to live.
If you look carefully at the plants around you,you will find that there are many types of plants.Some plants are large while others are small.Most plants are green.

㈤ 英语应用文日记的写作方法

要学好写英语短文，就必须经常练习写作。记 日记 是提高书面表达能力的有效 方法 之一。日记是每日生活的记载，是一种记事文体。接下来，我给大家准备了英语应用文日记的写作方法,欢迎大家参考与借鉴。

英语应用文日记的写作方法

一、日记的格式

英文日记通常由书端和正文两个部分组成。日记常以第一人称记下当天生活中的所见、所闻、所做或所想的事情。中、英文的日记三格式大致一样。英语日记的书端是专门写日记的日期、星期和天气的。左上角是日期(年、月、日)、星期。右上角写上当天的天气情况，如：Sunny, Fine, Rainy3, Windy4, Snowy5, Cloudy等。

1、日期表达有多种形式。年、月、日都写时，通常以月、日、年为顺序，月份可以缩写，日和年用逗号隔开。例如： December7 18, 2003 或者 Dec. 18, 2003

A) September8 1, 2004或September 1st, 2004也可省略写成Sept. 1, 2004或Sept. 1st, 2004;B)the 1st of September in 2004(月份不可以缩写)

B)只有月、日September 1或September 1st(月份可以缩写)

C)只有年、月September 2004或the September of 2004(月份不可以缩写)

以上的1或1st都应读作the first9。

2.星期也可以省略不写，可将其放在日期前或后，星期和日期之间不用标点，但要空一格，星期也可缩写。如：

Saturday10, October11 22nd, 2004;October 22nd, 2004 Saturday

3.天气情况必不可少。天气一般用一个形容词如 :Sunny2, Fine, Rainy, Snowy 等表示。写在日期之后，用逗号隔开，位于日记的右上角。如：

Saturday, March12 4, 2004, Windy;1st January13, 2004, Fine

二、日记的要求

日记的正文是日记的主要部分，写在星期和日期的正下方，可以顶格写，也可以内缩3至5个字母的空间。由于记载的内容通常已经发生，谓语动词多用一般过去时。但也可根据具体情况，用 其它 时态。如：记叙天气、描写景色，为了描写生动，可以使用现在时，以表现当时的情景。再如文后发表感想或评论可用现在时态或将来时态。记日记力求简单明了，有连贯性。若有文字提示，则应重视提示，把握要点。在句式上尽量使用简单句，以防繁杂，造 成语 法、句型错误。

三、日记的类型和训练

日记分为记事型、议论型、描写型和抒情型。建议大家在学习写日记的过程中，可按以下步骤进行： ①将一天所经历的主要事情和过程依次简要地记下来，不附加任何感情色彩，这是最简单的记日记的方法;

②阅读别人的日记，并利用所学过的句型来表达个人在一天中观察到的或感受到的事情。

【 范文 与点评】

March 12th, 2003, TuesdaySunny (Fine)

Today is Tree Planting14 Day. At 7:30 in the morning, all the students15 in our class met16 at the school gate17. We walked to the park. Miss Gao and other teachers went18 and worked19 with us. All the students worked very hard20, and we planted21 about 200 trees. Though22 we were dirty23 and tired24, we still25 felt very happy.

这是一篇记叙型的日记。结构严谨，中心突出，有选择地记录当天的见闻(人或事)，并加以分析和评论。

扩展：如何写好中学 英语 作文

写作在 英语学习 中是培养和提高语言能力的有效手段，它有助于巩固和掌握所学词汇、语法等语言知识，有助于训练直接用所学语言进行思维，有利于提高驾驭语言的能力。中学生该如何写好英语作文呢●写作步骤要写好一篇英语作文，掌握一定的写作技巧，应把握以下几个步骤： 1.认真审题立意，定 文章 之灵魂对命题作文必须认真审题，对自由作文必须立好意。 文章要有明确的主题，必须具备4个条件：准确、鲜明、深刻、集中。以本次比赛的命题作文“The English teacher I Admire Most”为例,文章的主题是关于记叙我最欣赏的一位英语老师,因而就不能泛泛谈论老师这一职业或自己的几位老师。2.草拟提纲，打造文章之骨架审好题，立好意后，就要写提纲，打造文章的骨架。文章布局要做好3件事：安排好层次段落，铺设好过渡，处理好开头和结尾。如命题作文中有提示句，还要从提示句的关键词出发，围绕关键词开拓思路，发挥联想，记录下联想到的东西，可以是 句子 或单词词组，可以是英语或汉语。仍以“The English Teacher I Admire Most”为例，提纲可以这样写: 1)Who is the English teacher I admire most 2) My reasons 3) What can I learn from the teacher 3.写出落主题句，理文章之脉络一篇短文的段落一般分为引导段、主题段和结尾段。每段的主题句非常重要，是作者思维的起点，切题的准绳，阐述的对象。看到段落主题句，读者大致了解段落要阐述的内容。段落主题句通常是一个语法结构完整、内容概括、用词简洁明了的单句。通常将段落主题句置于段落的开头，可使文章结构更清晰，有说服力。4.参照提纲，紧扣主题句，完成各段落，充文章之血肉有了段落主题句后，还需要顺着段落主题句的方向，参照提纲中的思路，从而完成各个段落。引导段要能引起读者的注意和兴趣，为主题段铺路架桥。主题段应围绕文章和该段的主题来展开。展开的方式包括：顺序法、举例法、比较法、对比法、说明法、因果法、推导法、归纳法，和下定义等。可以根据需要任选一种或几种方式。还是以“The English Teacher I Admire Most”为例，主题段中就能用到举例法、说明法、因果法等。进行这一步骤还需注意三方面问题：1)确保提纲中段落结构的思路与各段主题句的一致性。只有这样，才能保证所写段落不偏题，不跑题。2)要综合考虑各个段落的内容安排，避免段落内容的交叉。3)用好连接词，注意段落间、句子间的连贯性。要做到所写文章层次分明，思路清晰，文字连贯，就需要在句与句之间，段与段之间架起一座座桥梁，而连接词起的正是桥梁作用。●增加文采小窍门如果说第一、二步是对文章的构思，第三、四步骤则是真正地“写”了，用词是否贴切，文法是否正确，句式是否多变，文采是否有生气，关系到写作者的语言功底和水平，但也有些窍门，以下这几点可以供你参考。1.在整篇文章中，避免只是用一两个句式，要灵活运用各种句式。如倒装句、强调句、省略句、主从复合句、对比句、分词 短语 、介词短语等。2.使用不同长度的句子，通过分句和合句，增强句子的连贯性和表现力。3.改变句子的开头方式，不要一味以主、谓、宾、状的次序。可以把状语置于句首，或用分词短语等。4.学会使用过渡词。如：1)递进：further more, moreover, besides, in addition, thenetc. 2)转折：however, but, nevertheless, afteralletc. 3) 总结 ：finally, atlast, inbrief, toconclude 4)强调：really, indeed, certainly, surely, abovealletc. 5)对比：in the same way, justas, on the other hand,etc. 5.避免重复使用同一单词或词组。6.注意运用固定词组、习语、 谚语 来代替一些词表达意思，以增加文采。●把好检查最后一关1.是否切题分三点看：一是整篇文章内容是否切合文章标题要求;二是段落主题句的内容是否与各段落提示句内容相一致;三是段落内部的内容是否与段落主题句的表达相一致。如果发现任何一个层面不切题，应该尽可能弥补，删除那些多余的或不切题的地方，但切忌动“大手术”。2.是否连贯检查上下文是否连贯，句子衔接是否自然流畅，检验的标准主要是句子是否通畅，该用连词的地方用了没有，所用的连词是否合适。3.是否有语法错误主谓是否一致，动词的时态、语态、语气的使用是否正确，词组的搭配是否合乎习惯。还是以“The English Teacher I Admire Most”为例，根据此标题，文章肯定用第一人称“I”写，一般性的描述用现在时，举过去的事例用过去时。