点评作文英语怎么说

① 英语作文请求点评

以下是你的错误：
1. (starded) to learn English in Grade 6
正确：
2. And now I begin to listen to English radio (programs)
正确：programmes
3. I also have some (trouble) in learning English,such as,vocabulary and listening.
正确：troubles
4. I (believed) it will come true.
正确：believe

5. I also have some trouble in learning English,such as,vocabulary and listening.
建议：In the process of learning English, I met some obstacles such as from the aspects of vocabulary and listening.

6. They are helpful.
建议：They are indeed helpful to me.

7. Of course,I can't avoid making mistakes as others learning English.
建议: of course, I can't avoid making mistakes as learning a foreign language is a really tough for me.

8. For example,I often speak and write the Chinese English.
建议：For example, I often translate Chinese directly into English without considering the grammatical error.

9. I have a dream that I can speak English fluently as a native speaker one day.I believed it will come true.
建议: I wish I could master this language in the future.

② 请为我点评英语作文

如果来是essay对话，我觉得最源好用五个段落：
Introction
Body paragraph1
Body paragraph2
Body paragraph3
Conclusion
总体来说，还是很不错的，不过，最好不要用Firstly，secondly 来开始一段句子，应为那样会显得很无聊，而且没有变化感。试着用些比较有趣的开始，或者直接去掉Firstly，secondly 就可以啦。
还有就是每一个 Body paragraph 都先用一个statement然后再去补充，意思就是多写一点。
给55分。

③ 英语作文点评 谢谢

功底是有但是少些套路，建议背些模板和常用句型如议论文一般采用三段式模板好点正反对立观点分类阐明最好终结表达自己观点·····

④ 怎样成功点评学生的英语作文

Different people have different views on success. Some hold that making a great deal of money means success. Others argue that holding an important post in the government means success. Still others believe that having a high academic title at a famous university or a research institute means success.
In my opinion, success means brilliant achievement in our work. In other words, no matter what we do, making outstanding contributions to the development of our country and bringing help and happiness to others is success.

⑤ 英语作文点评

建议
Our school is preparing to hold (prepared被动不合适)
Festival will be held
It includes singing songs
There are...are your fans 此句有两个谓语动词，there be 和主系表结果冲突。可改为内A number of students in our school are your fans.
We will feel pleased(pleasure 名词放容feel后不合适)

⑥ 怎样点评高考英语作文

1. 关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……
There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some people suggest that ____.
2. 俗话说（常言道）……，它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。
There is an old saying______. It"s the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in many cases even today.
3. 现在，……，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，……；其次，……。更为糟糕的是……。
Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, ____ Second,____. What makes things worse is that______.
4. 现在，……很普遍，许多人喜欢……，因为……，另外（而且）……。
Nowadays，it is common to ______. Many people like ______ because ______. Besides，______.
5. 任何事物都是有两面性，……也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。
Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception，it has both advantages and disadvantages.
6. 关于……人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为（说）……，在他们看来，……
People's opinions about ______ vary from person to person. Some people say that ______.To them,_____.
7. 人类正面临着一个严重的问题……，这个问题变得越来越严重。
Man is now facing a big problem ______ which is becoming more and more serious.
8. ……已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。
______ has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.
9. ……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。
______ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.
10. 根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出……。很显然……，但是为什么呢？
According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph，it can be seen that______ while. Obviously，______，but why?

⑦ 英语作文点评，请高人指点

没有太大的问题，句子基本都把意思表达出来了

但是可能时态不是很清楚，过去回时间段里又掺带了答一般现在时，这个要改一下。

有一些词看起来像是你直接查的字典就写上去的，不是很恰当，用之前最好多看一下例句，模仿例句其实没什么坏处

有两句话我画了很长的线，实话讲不是正确的句子，一个句好里面用逗号连接了好几个完整的句子。要是先让句子看起来很高级就好好用从句，用不好不如直接写成正确的短句。写东西首先要是能表达清楚意思再是读起来好听

我试着尽量不改你的原词，修改了前几段，你可以参考一下。

⑧ 英语作文在线点评

happen everyday 改为： happy every day 每天很快乐（ everyday每日的）

in my home,has a robort改为： There will be a robot in my house.= There is going to be a robot in my house.= We will have a robot in my house.

it will be do ll jobs everyday 改为： It will do ll jobs for us every day.( will + 动词原形， be/ do 不能用在一起）

On hoilday ,we'll go to Sydney Opera House.-改为： We'll go to Sydney Opera House to spend our holiday.或者用： During our holiday, we'll go to Sydney Opera House.

Go to there is my dream改为： Going there is my dream.( 用动名词做主语， there前省略to) 或者改为： Because I am looking forward to going there for a long time.

⑨ 如何用英语评论英语作文

先写一下文章总体内容，说说哪里好哪里不好，然后说说文章的现实意义。

⑩ 评论一个人的英语作文怎么写

But on the other hand, he deced that if there is an infinite number of stars, how many evenly distribution in infinite space, this situation will not happen, because at this time there is no any one of them to fall to the center point.
When people talk about infinity, this argument is a trap you will encounter. In an infinite universe, every point can be considered as the center,