作文层次英语怎么说

1. 如何写出层次高的英语作文

书面表达（满分25分）。
1．近年来，西风东渐。圣诞节、情人节、母亲节、愚人节等“洋节”纷纷登陆我国，而且越来越受到年轻人的青睐。人们对这种现象的看法不一。请你根据生活实际，用英语简要描述这种现象，并阐述你的个人观点。
分析：
1）[思路点拨]本文是一篇发散性思维的开放性文章，符合现代高考的趋向，思路很好，检测效度高，区分能力强。选材贴近生活和实际，学生有内容可写。考生应该注意审题，写作要全面。最好从两个角度展开叙述，观点不要偏激。
2）要求：文章要有亮点句子。如果在单纯用简单句，势必影响到阅卷的得分。适当注意句式变换；鼓励学生用高级句子或短语，尽管可能有少量错误，只要符合阅卷思想，仍可给高分。
参考答案：
Great changes have taken place in the past few years, including festivals. Some special days such as “Christmas Day”, Valentine’s Day, Mother’s Day and Fool’s Day which used to be unfamiliar to us are now becoming better known,attracting a large number of youths.
Having been faced with this fact, I think it’s not completely good to our country. With the coming of foreign culture,chances are that China is in danger of losing its own traditional culture. As is known, the youth is the symbol of a country. Only if every youth loves their own culture better than other’s, our own precious culture can always be alive.
However, every coin has two sides. It also brings some benefits with the entering of western culture. For instance, Mother’s Day can remind us of caring about our dear mothers, and Fool’s Day can provide us with many surprises.
In a nutshell, we should absorb the good things in foreign culture, aiming to make our own culture perfect!
[亮点回放]
1． Great changes have taken place 运用现在完成时态，属于高级句子
2． ，including...是现在分词，是高级词汇/语法。
3． which used to be unfamiliar是限制性定语从句，是高级句子。
4． attracting a large number of是分词短语，是高级用法。
5． Having been faced with是分词以及被动语态的综合运用！
6． With the coming of...是介词with的用法，也可以说独立主格结构在写作中的具体运用。
7． chances are that是新课标新增的短语。
8． in danger of是介词短语在作文的实际运用。
9． As is known...是As引导的非限制性定语从句。
10．Only if every youth loves their own culture better than other’s, our own precious culture can always be alive.本句是倒装结构。
11．However, every coin has two sides.本句是亮点之一：既能承上启下，又能体现档次。
12．with the entering of western culture.是介词的实际运用。
13．remind us of caring about是高级短语的实际运用。
14．In a nutshell是新课标新增短语，是表示总结，是高级短语。
15．aiming to make our own culture perfect!是现在分词的实际运用！
老师点评：本篇文章的参考答案是一篇精品习作，文章内容全面，语言生动，层次性强，亮点很多！书法美妙！过度自然得体！短语、句式、语法三位一体！全篇是上上之作！是很好的参考榜样！正常情况下，应该得到一类的分数！
那么如何写出高层次的句子呢？这是现代高中高考备考的重点；笔者根据自己的教学实践，总结以下思路，希望能抛转引玉，对广大考生有所启迪！
首先：巧背课文，巧析课文，充分利用教材和材料。也就是说，日常学习中，发现不少老师要求学生背课文的篇目不少，但背是为了什么？目的不清。很多人背完了也就完成任务了。我认为，这是浅层次教学，浮在面上，而不能充分利用教材这个财富。我的做法是：在理解、背诵或熟读的环境下，精心分析每一个较为高级的句子或短语，而为己用，并模仿造句，为日后自己作文大好基础。例如：在Mole 4 Great Scientist一文有这样一句话：
As a result of Yuan Longping’s discoveries Chinese rice proction rose by 47.5 percent.
此处出现了较高级的短语as a result (of)就可以反复训练，直到学生熟练会用。如：
1）由于他的粗心大意，导致考试失败。
（1）As a result of his carelessness, he failed in the examination.
（2）He was very careless, as a result, he failed in the examination.
发散思维：
（3）His carelessness led to his failure in the examination.
(4) His failure in the exam resulted in his carelessness.
(5) His carelessness caused him to fail in the examination.
其次：认真学习，掌握英语基本的造句常识。如：地点状语和时间状语同时出现时，地点状语一般放到前面，地点的顺序是从小到大。如：
Albert Einstein was born in Ulm , Germany in 1879.
It is reported that the Shenzhou V was sent out into the sky in JiuquanGansu, China last year.
第三：巧归词类，巧比较词法，不断丰富自己的造句功能。
如：单词discover ,invent:
When did Albert Einstein discovered the theory of relativity?
As is known , China was the first country to invent the powder in the world.
又如：单词fortunately的用法：
Fortunately, he wasn’t staying in his motherland when the tsunami happened.
再如介词with.
With the child leading the way, the lady found the way easily.
With so much work to do, he has no time to have a break.
With nothing done, he left angrily.
第四：通过句式变换，丰富自己的造句功能。
昨晚我到你家的时候，你碰巧不在家。
You happened to be out when I called on you last night.
It happened that you were out when I called on you last night.
2)他今天没来的原因是他病了。
He is absent today ,because he is ill.
Because of his illness, he is absent today.
The reason why he is absent today is that he is ill.
3)人们刚才还看见他们在大树下玩耍。（主动、被动的转换）
People saw them playing under the tree just now.
They were seen playing under the tree just now.
第五：通过不同的题材，搜集不同的语句，积累丰富自己的造句功能。如书信的写作，从格式到句子，都应该构成自己的语言小库。如：文章开头：
I’m glad to have heard from you./Glad to hear from. Etc.
结尾可以是：
I’m looking forward to hearing from you./I’m expecting an early reply. Etc.
又如对科学家的描述：
Albert Einstein became famous for his discovery of the theory of relativity .
Albert Einstein was awarded the Nobel Prize for physics in the year 1921.
When Hitler came to power he had to leave Germany and wend to work in the US.
People thought highly of Albert Einstein for his great achievements on science.
第六：仔细研究篇章，注意过度词 的准确使用。这也是对嵌词造句的一种考验。如：besides, in stead(of) ,however, but ,although, now that, since. so, first, second, finally, in the end, as a result etc.准确地利用这些词汇，都是文章的亮点。
Albert Einstein didn’t stay in Germany any more. Instead, he went to America to work on .
Although Albert Einstein became famous , he was still easy to get long with.
第七：正确理解简单句和主从句的内涵，并能得体地运用。从简单句的五种基本用法，到主、从句的各种变化，从省略到让步状语，无处不是提高学生造句能力的机会。如：
1）I want to make it clear that when and where we can solve the problem successfully.
2)This is the first time that I have been to the Great Wall.
3)Now that I have been here , I do want to live here longer.
4)I won’t attend the party unless invited.
5Mary wants to be a soldier when she grows up.
6）Child as he is, he has mastered more than 4,000 English words.
第八：正确运用语法知识造句,把它变为生动的高级句子，丰富学生的英语内涵。
How I wish I had your brains.
The moment I heard the news I couldn’t help laughing.
Hardly had we gone there when it began to rain.
Not knowing what to do , we had to ask for help.
On the top of the building stands a little child.
In order to win the first prize, the students are trying their best to make a good preparation.
Frankly speaking, I don’t think what he said at the meeting is right.
Given the chance, I would do it better.
Not until last year did he realize the mistakes he had made.
I found my book where I put it.
第九：巧用常见英语素材进行积累，也就是说，通过阅读文章，包括报纸，不断搜集，把材料上引起你兴趣的句子变为己用，这样日积月累，就会很高的造句能力；同样，英语文章就会上档次，说、写的交际能力就会发生质的飞跃！
跟踪练习：
请根据下列提示写一篇Albert Einstein的文章。
1．出生在1879年德国的乌尔姆城，直到3岁才会说话。在学校他喜欢数学。在他16岁的时候，就有了相对论的理念。
2．在1905年，他出版了关于相对论理论的特殊见解。1909年，他成了一名大学老师。
3．1915年，他概括、出版了相对论。
4．1921年，由于他的杰出贡献，而获得诺贝尔物理学奖。
5．由于希特了上台，他不得不逃离德国而前往美国，继续工作。
6．1955年逝世。
参考答案：
Albert Einstein, who is thought highly of in the world, is regarded as the greatest physicist of the twentieth century. He was born in Ulm, Germany, in 1879.However, as a child, he didn’t speak until he was three. When he was studying in the school he showed his interest in maths and then became a good student. At the age of 16, he began to have the idea of relativity. Then in 1905, he first published the special theory of relativity, and in 1909, be became a university teacher . Then in the year 1915, he published the great theory of relativity. Six years later he was awarded the Nobel Prize for physics .Although he was world famous then, he had to leave Germany ,for Hitler came into power. In the end he settled in America, where he went on with his research. .In the year 1955,Einstein ,the great man left the world forever.
一篇优秀文章是难得的，但只要每一位考生，经过努力，考前强化训练，搞好模拟，高考中完全可以写出层次高的英语作文的。

2. “作文”用英语怎么说

作文：composition n.
How to write the composition “ My weekend “ ?
如何写” 我的周末” 这篇作文？

3. ①英语作文要怎么提高层次.……像平时除了老师提供的句子外，要去哪获得别的好句子>_< ②高中

英语提高层次要提高你的语感，平常多看一些阅读理解 ，杂志可以看读者这种有深意的文章，祝你学习进步

4. 层次清楚不管什么样的英语作文，层次清

尤其是来毕业 论文 写作源和期刊 论文 写作，所以在学术写作功能的研发这块已经非常成熟了写作的范畴有点广，这种学术性的写作就需要依靠论文写作工具，大概也就是总分总的模式。论文 写作，笔杆网，等等这些国内外的网站现在都认识到这一点，这些学术性的写作是对文章层次要求非常高的。如果是长篇或短篇小说写作，各有千秋，如果是普通的作文写作，笔杆网则是中国的一家专门做学术写作产品的网站，有一个大概的逻辑就可以，和一些论文写作网站来进行文章内容规范，就看个人的文字功底了，其中grammarly是个美国的产品，基本的格式是一定要遵循的，像grammarly

5. 让英语作文有层次有组织,应该多用什么单词

firstly, secondly ,lastly,firstofall, moreover,meanwhile 等 关联词和 分点类的词

6. 一篇英语作文，大学层次，

题目呢？大兄弟

7. 高中英语作文怎么写

这里给出一些实践的建议。

1、书写。

书写真的很重要。

高二第一次月考班里有个同学，英语功底极差，作文错误百出，第一行就写了一个there are some advice for you，得了21分。（也因为那次是请外边老师阅卷——他们并不很负责任。）因为人家写字好看。相对的，你的那张图的书写显然不合格。

写字要注意以下几点，大小一致，倾斜度一致，间距一致。

四线三格的第二格(a这里)大一点，一三格短一点（bpg尾巴短点）。

写印刷体，即g，y，f勾小一点，不要连笔。

倾斜度一致，可以完全不倾斜。

字母间略微留出间距，不要紧密相连。

我的英语老师让每个同学每天练三行字，这导致她所教的班（一个尖班和一个普通班）分别是6个理科班中作文20+人数的前2。最初，你努力的画出每一个字母，很慢，也不好看；但即使慢也要力求最好效果。一周后，你就会熟练很多，也快很多。

2、亮点

如果你真的是李华，你要写一篇书信给你的外教/笔友，你会写这些：

第一，很高兴收到你的信，我了解了你的问题。

第二，关于你的问题，我的建议是：A，B，C。

第三，我希望我的建议能有用。

最后，Looking forward to your reply。

但是你是一名考生，你要写一篇作文给你的老师看，所以你应该(are supposed to)写这些：

第一，我的书写很漂亮。

第二，我会用这些句式：A，B，C。

第三，我会用很多高级词汇。

最后，Looking forward to your 给满分。

所以我们在写作文时，最重要的是说服老师打高分。

我的做法是这样的：

1.平时学习时，准备一个“我的高级词列表”，准备出几个泛用的、很高级的词汇和句式。

2.考试时，尽量多的试着插进去。“这个词还没有用到呢，想办法来一句。”当然没有必要真的全都写到，有几个就够了。

事实上我的词汇量并不大，但我们只需要准备几个高级词，每次考试逐一用 一遍。

例如我会准备这些（就是老师上课讲过的）：

hence（所以）

in no way +半倒装（绝不可能）

what does count/matter is that（最重要的是）

enable（允许，使能够）

in spite of the fact that

with复合结构/独立主格

…………

另外，我的老师讲到过一个技巧叫做“主语物化”，就是说你的主语少用I,you,we，多用it,important decisions,great actions之类的。

最后的那句也讲讲： Please tell me in advance, I can prepare for it. 体会一下批改前后对比：Please tell me in advance, so proper arrangement can be made.

8. 英语作文的结构层次

1) 翻译先... 中翻英...句子

2) 连惯式翻译 ... 中翻英连惯式翻译

3) above all...写作的前哨站...英语作文的结构

9. 高考英语作文有哪些层次词

对英语来说，考前几天需要的是心理的调整。 1、首先，应该做一些容易的题目，内使自己心情平静。其容次，不应强迫自己记忆一些难度比较大、比较容易混的东西。考试前要做一些常规的题目。 2、 听力训练，贵在坚持，直至高考前夕。 3、单项填空淡化语法的考查，重视语境，考点往往是英汉两种文化的差异，如：动词的时态和语态，非谓语动词，习惯用法等，并以交际的方式考查。因此建议同学们选择一些具备这些特点的试题做。 4、记叙型完形填空是备考的重点。建议同学们每天做一篇完形填空题，一直到高考，选材要侧重对于心理活动描写分析的篇章。 5、最好天天阅读，在选择材料上要重视科普类文章，阅读这类材料时一定要注意文章的开头或第一段，因为这往往是中心大意所在。 6、短文改错考查的重点是看句子结构是否完整，习惯用法固定搭配是否正确，上下文逻辑是否合理，主谓是否一致，时态、语态是否正确，冠词、代词、连词、形容词、副词以及关系词的使用是否得当。 7、背范文在最后冲刺阶段对作文很有效，基础差的同学可以利用范文中的句子写作，基础好的同学可以利用范文中的关联词和，复合句和高级词汇提高自己作文的得分档次。