用英語觀察日記怎麼寫作文

January 6, 2014, Thursday, Sunny
This afternoon when I was shopping in the supermarket after school I saw a little boy crying right in the middle of the aisle. He cried so loudly that a crowd of people gathered around him. The boy was about three or four years old, with tears on his face. An old lady said, "The boy must be lost. Where is his mother?" I walked to him and gave him a lollipop. "Let』s look for your mother!" I said. Then I took him to the service desk to make an announcement. After ten minutes, his mother arrived. On seeing his mother the boy burst into laughter at once. I am really happy to help the boy although I was blamed by my mother for coming home late. Just like the warm sunshine, helping others makes me feel warm.

㈡ 鑻辨枃鏃ヨ伴樼洰鎬庝箞鍐欎綔鏂

1. 鑻辮鏃ヨ扮殑鏍煎紡

July 6 2007 It was the first day of our summer holiday. All of us were very happy. Why? Because we have one months to do things we love to do. We are free.Although we have some homework. But we can finish them in several days. And the rest time we can make good use of. My god! We have been very tired after hard studying. In winter holidays, I want to have full sleepand eat good food in order to replenish myself. Last but not the least, I will have a good rest. 榪欐槸絎涓澶╋紝鎴戜滑鐨勬殤鍋囥

鎴戜滑澶у墮兘闈炲父楂樺叴銆備負浠涔堬紵鍥犱負鎴戜滑鏈変竴涓鏈堢殑浜嬫垜浠閮界埍鍋氱殑浜嬨

鎴戜滑寰堢┖闂.鉶界劧鎴戜滑鏈変竴浜涘姛璇俱備絾鏄錛屾垜浠鍙浠ュ畬鎴愪粬浠鐨勮嫢騫插ぉ銆

鍏朵綑鐨勬椂闂存垜浠鍙浠ュソ濂藉埄鐢ㄣ傛垜鐨勪笂甯濓紒鎴戜滑宸茬粡寰堢柌鎯鍚庡緢闅懼︿範銆

鍦ㄥ啲瀛ｅ亣鏈燂紝鎴戝笇鏈涜兘鏈夊厖鍒嗙殑寰堝ソ鍚冪殑椋熺墿錛屼互琛ュ厖鑷宸便傛渶鍚庝絾騫墮潪鏈涓嶉噸瑕侊紝鎴戜細濂藉ソ浼戞伅銆

July 7 2007 It was the second day of our summer holiday. I felt good. I felt I am free. I had a lot of time to do things I like. My parents are in Zhongshan. So I live alone but I don't feel lonely. But I didn't do something special. I stayed at home and watched TV. Oh! I wrote an Englishdaily position. It was my homework. Today, I have slept for 14 hours.I thought I was very tired. It was time for dinner. I must go! I am very hungry. 榪欐槸鎴戜滑絎浜屽ぉ鐨勬殤鍋囥傛垜鎰熻夊緢濂姐

鎴戣夊緱鎴戝緢鑷鐢便傛垜鏈夊緢澶氭椂闂村仛鎴戝枩嬈銆

鎴戠殑鐖舵瘝閮藉湪涓灞便傛墍浠ワ紝鎴戠嫭鑷鐢熸椿錛屼絾鎴戝苟涓嶆劅鍒板ょ嫭銆

浣嗘槸錛屾垜娌℃湁鍋氫粈涔堢壒鍒銆傛垜浣忓湪瀹墮噷鐪嬬數瑙嗐

鍣錛佹垜鍐欎簡鑻辮鏃ヨ扮粍鎴愩傝繖鏄鎴戠殑鍔熻俱

浠婂ぉ錛屾垜鐫′簡14 灝忔椂.鎴戜互涓烘垜寰堢柌鎯銆傜幇鍦ㄦ槸鍚冩櫄楗銆

鎴戝繀欏誨幓錛佹垜闈炲父娓存湜銆 July 10 2007 I am planning to spend my summer holiday on sports this year. Playing basketball is always my favourite, so some of my clas *** ates and I will form a *** all team and play basketball together. Sometimes we may have a match against some other teams and I do enjoy the sense when we win the game. 鎴戣″垝鑺辮垂鎴戞殤鍋囦綋鑲蹭粖騫淬

鎵撶鐞冩槸鎴戞渶鍠滄㈢殑錛屾墍浠ユ垜鐨勪竴浜涘悓瀛﹀拰鎴戝皢緇勫緩涓涓灝忓洟闃燂紝涓璧鋒墦綃鐞冦傛湁鏃訛紝鎴戜滑鍙鑳芥湁涓浜涘叾浠栫殑姣旇禌闃熶紞鍜屾垜鍠滄㈢殑鎰熻夛紝褰撴垜浠璧浜嗚繖鍦烘瘮璧涖

July 14 2007 Today I found time was a cruel thing. Whatever man is, time always goes on. It won't stay to wait for somebody. You can't use anything to exchange time. Time is also a fair thing. Although you have a lot of money or you enjoy high reputation, time won't leave them more. Today I found I hadn't enough time. Although I have more than a-month holiday, but I found I had a lot of things to do. I had a lot of homework to do and I am essential to plete the homework as soon as I have time. 浠婂ぉ錛屾垜鍙戠幇鏃墮棿鏄涓涓孌嬪繊鐨勪簨鎯呫傛棤璁虹敺浜猴紝鎬繪槸瀵圭殑鏃墮棿銆

瀹冧笉浼氱暀涓嬫潵絳夊緟鏌愪漢銆傛偍涓嶈兘浣跨敤浠諱綍浜ゆ祦鏃墮棿銆

鏃墮棿涔熸槸涓涓鍏騫崇殑浜嬫儏銆傝櫧鐒朵綘鏈夊緢澶氶挶錛屾垨鑰呮偍浜鏈夊緢楂樼殑澹拌獕錛屾椂闂翠笉浼氱誨紑浠栦滑鏇村氥

浠婂ぉ錛屾垜鍙戠幇鎴戝凡緇忔病鏈夎凍澶熺殑鏃墮棿銆傝櫧鐒舵垜宸茬粡瓚呰繃涓涓鏈堝亣鏈燂紝浣嗘垜鍙戠幇鎴戞湁寰堝氫簨鎯呰佸仛銆

鎴戞湁寰堝氬姛璇捐佸仛錛屾垜蹇呴』瀹屾垚鐨勫姛璇懼彧瑕佹垜鏈夋椂闂淬 July 15 2007 I have rested for 10 days. In these days, I felt very bored. I didn't know to do what. Although I had a lot of things to do, I felt unfortable. I was ill because of the hot weather. I was tired, sleepy and had no strength. My parents are worried about my health. in fact, it didn't matter. I was always in the room with air-conditioner and opened it in a low temperature. So when I went out, the high temperature disagreed to me.At last, I was ill. 鎴戝凡緇忎紤鎮浜10澶┿

鍦ㄨ繖浜涙棩瀛愰噷錛屾垜瑙夊緱寰堟棤鑱娿傛垜涓嶇煡閬撳仛浠涔堛

鉶界劧鎴戞湁寰堝氫簨鎯呰佸仛錛屾垜瑙夊緱涓嶈垝鏈嶃傛垜鐢熺棶鏄鍥犱負鐐庣儹鐨勫ぉ姘斻

鎴戠瘡浜嗭紝鍥幫紝涔熸病鏈夊姏閲忋傛垜鐨勭埗姣嶆媴蹇冩垜鐨勫仴搴楓

浜嬪疄涓婏紝榪欏苟涓嶉噸瑕併傛垜鎬繪槸鍦ㄦ埧闂寸┖璋冩墦寮浜嗗畠鍦ㄤ綆娓┿

鍥犳わ紝褰撴垜璧頒簡鍑哄幓錛岄珮娓╀笉緇欐垜.鍦ㄦ渶鍚庯紝鎴戣鉶愬緟銆 July 16 2007 It was sunny today. I was excited. I got up at a quarter to seven. I made a appointment to meet at nine o'clock. After I had my breakfast, I went to the Wanjia Market . It was hot outside. When I arrived, my friends didn't arrive. I waited for him in front of the KFC's door. I haven't seen them for a year. And in a year, we didn't e into contact with others frequently. About ten minutes left, my friends arrived one by one. After we greeted,we went to play basketball in Liwan Gymnasium. The match last for tow hours.Oh!I fill very happy today錛 榪欐槸浠婂ぉ闃沖厜鏄庡獨銆

鎴戝緢鍏村嬨傛垜寰楀埌浜嗗湪鍏鏃跺洓鍗佷簲鍒嗐

鎴戠殑浠誨懡錛屼互婊¤凍涔濈偣閽熴備箣鍚庯紝鎴戞湁鎴戠殑鏃╅愶紝鎴戝幓浜嗕竾瀹跺競鍦恆

榪欐槸鐑澶栭潰銆傚綋鎴戝埌杈撅紝鎴戠殑鏈嬪弸浠騫舵病鏈夎揪鎴愩

鎴戠瓑寰呯潃浠栧墠闈㈢殑鑲寰峰熀鐨勫ぇ闂ㄣ傛垜榪樻病鏈夌湅鍒頒粬浠涓轟竴騫淬

騫跺湪涓騫村唴錛屾垜浠娌℃湁鎺ヨЕ鍒板叾浠栦漢棰戠箒銆傜害10鍒嗛挓紱誨紑錛屾垜鐨勬湅鍙嬩滑鏉ュ埌涓涓鍙堜竴涓銆

鍦ㄦ垜浠榪庢帴錛屾垜浠鍘繪墦鐞冭崝婀句綋鑲查嗐傝繖銆

2. 鑻辮鏃ヨ板拰浣滄枃璇ユ庝箞鍐

鑻辮鏃ヨ幫紝鏃ユ湡鏍忕殑鏈堜喚涓庢槦鏈燂紝鍥犱負緇忓父閲嶈嗙殑鍏崇郴錛屽父浠ョ緝涓庝唬鏇匡紝濡侸anuary 1st, Sunday 灝卞彲鍐欐垚Jan. 1 , Sun. 鎴朣un., Jan. 1 銆 鍚庨潰鍔犱笂姘斿欏栧喌錛屽侰loudy錛堥槾錛夈乺ainy錛堥洦錛 銆亀indy錛堥庯級銆乧ool錛堝噳鐖斤級絳夌瓑銆

鑻辨枃鏃ヨ版湁鎺ュ啓鍙婁竴欏電瘒涓ょ嶄富瑕佸艦寮忥紝濡傛灉姝ｅ紡涓鐐圭殑錛屽垯浼氬湪鏃ユ湡鏍忎笌鍐呮枃涔嬮棿鍔犱笂棰樼洰銆

澶氬弬鐓у悕瀹跺啓娉曪紝澶氱（緇冨啓浣滄妧宸э紝浣犲氨鑳藉湪姣忓ぉ鍐欒嫳鏂囨棩璁扮殑涔犳儻涓錛屽皢浣滄枃鑳藉姏鏃犲艦涓鎻愭悶銆傚洜涓烘棩璁扮殑鐢ㄥ瓧綺劇畝錛屽彇鏉愬懆騫匡紝鑰屼笖浜轟漢鐨嗘槸鎻愮瑪灝卞啓錛屾湁璇濈洿璇達紝涓嶅儚鍐欎功淇°佹枃絝狅紝榪樻湁鍙鑳藉厛鎵撹崏紼匡紝鍐嶅啓銆

涓銆佷綔鏂囪佸︿細縐緔

鈥滆諱功鐮翠竾鍗鳳紝涓嬬瑪濡傛湁紲炩濓紝鈥滃閥濡囬毦涓烘棤綾充箣鐐娾濆彜浜鴻繖浜涙葷粨錛屼粠姝ｅ弽涓ゆ柟闈㈣存槑浜嗏滅Н緔鈥濆湪鍐欎綔涓鐨勯噸瑕佹с傗滃鉤鏃墮潬縐緔錛岃冨満鍑鍙戞尌鈥濓紝榪欐槸鑰冨満瀛﹀瓙鐨勫叡鍚屼綋浼氥

錛堜竴錛夎璦鏂歸潰瑕佸緩絝嬧滆奼囧簱鈥濄傝奼囨槸鏂囩珷鐨勭粏鑳炪傚箍涔夌殑璇奼囷紝涓嶄粎鎸囪瘝銆佺煭璇鐨勬繪眹錛岃繕鍖呮嫭鍙ュ瓙銆佸彞緹ゃ傚緩絝嬧滆奼囧簱鈥濋斿緞鏈変簩錛氱涓鏄闃呰匯傚鉤鏃惰佸箍娉涢槄璇諱功綾嶃佹姤鍒婏紝騫跺仛濂借諱功絎旇幫紝鎶婁竴浜涗紭緹庣殑璇嶈銆佸彞瀛愩佽孌墊憳褰曞湪鐗瑰畾鐨勬湰瀛愪笂錛屼篃鍙浠ュ埗浣滆諱功鍗＄墖涓娿傜浜屾槸鐢熸椿銆傚鉤鏃惰佹崟鎹夊ぇ浼楀彛璇涓椴滄椿鐨勮璦錛屽苟鎶婅繖浜涜璦璁板湪闅忚韓甯︾殑灝忔湰瀛愭垨鍗＄墖涓婏紝榪欐牱鏃ョН鏈堢瘡銆侀泦鑵嬫垚瑁橈紝璇磋瘽 灝辮兘鍑哄彛鎴愮珷錛屼綔鏂囧氨浼氬欑瑪鐢熻姳銆

錛堜簩錛夎佸姞寮烘潗鏂欐柟闈㈢殑縐緔銆傛潗鏂欐槸鏂囩珷鐨勮鑲夈傝稿氬︾敓鐢變簬騫蟲椂涓嶆敞鎰忕Н緔緔犳潗錛屾瘡鍒頒綔鏂囨椂灝卞幓鎼滆偁鎸傝倸錛屾垨鑰呰儭緙栨垨鑰

3. 鎬庝箞鍐欒嫳鏂囨棩璁

榪欎釜鏄鎴戝垵涓鏃跺欐斁鍋囪佸笀鐣欑殑鏃ヨ伴噷鍐欑殑錛岀◢寰鏀逛簡涓涓嬶紝絎涓綃囧啓鐨勬槸鏈夊叧鑷宸變負濂ヨ繍浼氭崘闆惰姳閽辯殑浜嬶紝搴旇ュ嶅悎浣犵殑瑕佹眰 絎涓綃 My savings-box 鎴戠殑瀛橀挶緗 I had a baby pig.It was a lovely one.It was as white as snow and with red patterns on its back.It was so fat that it looked like a ball.It had a big mouth and a *** all nose.Its tail was very short.It had four strong leds.Oh,I fot to tell you that there was a hole on錛堟垨鑰呮槸鐢╥n鎴戜篃涓嶅お紜瀹氾級its back.So it was not a real pig but a savings-box. I like my little"pig" very much and often fed it with my pocket money as food.The pig was very *** iling銆

It seemed to be saying thanks to me in return.The pig was heavier and heavier,at last,it was full of money. One day,I was very sad to break the pig into pieces because I was going to contribute the money to the 29th BeiJing Olympic Games. The night,I dreamed a sweet dream,the money I had saved was sent to BEIJING 絎浜岀瘒 鍐欏緱鏄鍘葷粰濂跺ザ榪囩敓鏃ョ殑浜 涔熷緢澶嶅悎瀹為檯 It was Grandma"s錛堝簲璇ユ槸涓涓鎾囷紝鎴戞墦涓嶅嚭鏉ワ級birthday銆侳ather,mother and I went to visit her.She lives with my uncle in a villagenot too far away.Early in the morning we brought some presents and took the bus to get there Grandma and uncle were so glad to see us.We gave the presents to Grandma and she was so happy.Then wo sat down to talk,while tncle prepare lunch. The meal was so nice that we all enjoyed it very much. At 4 o"錛堣繕鏄涓涓鎾囷級clock,we said goodbye and returned 鑻辨枃鎵撶潃鎬鍒鎵錛屽彲鑳芥湁鐨勫崟璇嶆湁鐐歸敊璇瘇涓瀹氳侀夋垜鐨勫晩錛屾垜鎵撲簡鍗婂ぉ浜嗭紝鎬佷笉瀹規槗鍟~銆

4. 鍐欎竴綃囪嫳鏂囨棩璁頒負棰樼殑浣滄枃50瀛,鍒濅竴

The last children' day

The weather is so good for today is the children' day June 6th.

We go to zoo to celebrate our last children' day.

We see the elephant, which is the biggest animal on the land. It is so big and so friendly.

And we also see the Giraffe. It is a timid animal and its neck is very long.

We have a good time in the whole afternoon at zoo.

5. 奼10綃囪嫳璇鏃ヨ板拰5綃囪嫳璇浣滄枃

鏃ヨ幫細1.July 5th Monday cloudyToday I came back from a place named 鈥渉e chuan鈥, it's a good place. There has some nice view like chang jiang river. I came there in o days ago. Our aunt is here. We had a good time in there. But I also write English dairy too. Because of the wrong puter, the message didn't here. I wish myself to live more better tomorrow.7鏈5鍙 鏄熸湡涓 澶氫簯浠婂ぉ鎴戜粠涓涓鍚嶅彨鈥滃悎宸濃濈殑鍦版柟鍥炴潵錛岃繖鏄涓涓濂藉湴鏂廣

鏈変竴浜涚編涓界殑娌蟲祦錛屽氨鍍忛暱奼熸渤嫻併傛垜鏄鍦ㄤ袱澶╁墠鍒伴偅閲岀殑銆

鍥犱負鎴戠殑濮ㄥ堝湪榪欎釜鍦版柟銆傛垜浠鐜╃殑寰堝紑蹇冦

浣嗘垜涔熷啓浜嗘垜鐨勫亣鏈熻嫳璇鏃ヨ般傚洜涓鴻＄畻鏈哄嚭閿欎簡錛岃繖鏉℃秷鎮娌℃湁鍦ㄨ繖閲屻

鎴戝笇鏈涜嚜宸辨槑澶╄兘鐢熸椿寰楁洿緹庡ソ銆2.July 6th Tuesday cloudyAh ha, when I get up, it was time for lunch. But I really have a lot of work to do, I must write words English dairy, then learned 鈥淟i yang鈥 English, then 鈥︹ .Oh, my god, if I do it in the afternoon, I will ready to dead. So I wrote words, now I'm writing my English dairy. Wish I could finish these works today. Bye!7鏈6鍙 鏄熸湡浜 澶氫簯鍝堝搱錛屽綋鎴戣搗搴婄殑鏃跺欙紝鍒氬ソ鍒頒簡鍗堥愭椂闂淬

浣嗘垜鐪熺殑鏈夊緢澶氬伐浣滆佸仛錛屾垜蹇呴』鍐欏崟璇嶏紝鐒跺悗瀛︿範"鏉庨槼鐤鐙傝嫳璇"錛岀劧鍚庘︹﹀摝錛屾垜鐨勪笂甯濓紝濡傛灉鎴戣佷竴鐩村仛鍒頒笅鍗堬紝鎴戠湡鐨勫揩姝諱簡銆傚洜姝ゆ垜鍦ㄥ啓鍗曡瘝錛屽啓鎴戠殑鑻辨枃鏃ヨ般

甯屾湜鎴戣兘瀹屾垚浠婂ぉ榪欎簺浠誨姟銆傚啀瑙佷簡錛3.July 9th Friday sunnyHow happy I am. Yesterday I finished all the work very quick, so I have a lot of time to do myself. Sometimes finish work early is a good thing, we can have more interests to do the next work. Because of this, I write English dairy eight in the morning. But I wrote it in the evening in the pass day. Everyone, if you can finish the work quickly, not lazy, try your best.7鏈9鏃 鏄熸湡浜 闃沖厜鎴戞湁澶氫箞鐨勯珮鍏淬

鏄ㄥぉ鎴戝緢蹇瀹屾垚浜嗘墍鏈夌殑宸ヤ綔錛屾墍浠ユ垜鏈夊緢澶氭椂闂寸敤鏉ヨ嚜宸卞垎閰嶃傛湁鏃舵彁鍓嶅畬鎴愬︿範浠誨姟鏄浠跺ソ浜嬶紝鎴戜滑浼氭湁鏇村氱殑鍏磋叮鍘誨仛涓嬩竴浠朵簨鎯呫

姝ｅ洜涓哄傛わ紝鎴戝啓鑻辮鏃ヨ伴兘鏄鍦ㄦ棭涓婂叓鐐廣備絾鍦ㄨ繃鍘葷殑鏅氫笂鎴戣繕鏄瑕佸湪鏅氫笂鍐欍

浠諱綍浜猴紝濡傛灉浣犺兘瀹屾垚榪欓」宸ヤ綔寰楀緢蹇錛屼笉瑕佸伔鎳掞紝灝借嚜宸辨渶澶х殑鍔鍔涖4.July 12th Monday sunnyHow tired am I! I went back from chongqing three hours ago. In the city I nearly lost the way. Thanks for the hot heart man woman. They help us to find the way. Oh, don't think so badly, I'm fine. Because of my hard, my homepage is more beautiful than before, I'm very happy to see it. I love make homepage, if you love it, please let me know, we can take hours talking about homepage. Thank you.7鏈12鏃 鏄熸湡涓 闃沖厜鎴戝ソ緔鍟婏紒鎴戜粠閲嶅簡鍥炴潵宸茬粡鏈変笁灝忔椂浜嗐

鍦ㄥ煄閲屾垜宸鐐硅糠璺銆傝阿璋㈢儹蹇冧漢錛屼粬浠甯鍔╂垜浠鎵懼埌浜嗚礬銆

鍣錛屼笉瑕佷互涓哄緢緋熺硶錛屾垜寰堝ソ銆傚洜涓烘垜鐨勫姫鍔涳紝鎴戠殑涓婚〉姣斾互鍓嶆洿婕備寒浜嗭紝鎴戝緢楂樺叴鐪嬪埌瀹冨彉鎴愯繖鏍楓

鎴戠埍緗戦〉錛屽傛灉浣犵埍瀹冿紝璇瘋╂垜鐭ラ亾錛屾垜浠鍙浠ヨ姳鍑犱釜灝忔椂璋堣轟富欏點傝阿璋浣犮

5.July 14th Wednesday rainy Yesterday I came to the center of Chongqing with my mother. We came to a place named 鈥渢oward the air door鈥. I think many people know it. The night view is so beautiful that we all don't want to back to home. I have a photo here. In the nine, we had to go back home. I didn't wash my face before I went to bed, I'm too tired. 7鏈1鏃 鏄熸湡涓 涓嬮洦鏄ㄥぉ鎴戞潵鍒伴噸搴嗗競涓蹇冨拰濡堝堝湪涓璧楓傛垜浠鏉ュ埌涓涓鍦版柟錛屽悕鍙鈥滃悜絀轟腑闂ㄢ濄

鎴戞兂寰堝氫漢鐭ラ亾銆傜編涓界殑澶滄櫙璁╂垜浠閮戒笉鎯沖洖瀹躲

鎴戣繖杈規湁寮犵収鐗囥傛櫄涓9鐐癸紝鎴戜滑涓嶅緱涓嶅洖瀹躲

鎴戞病媧楄劯灝變笂搴婄潯瑙変簡錛屾垜澶緔浜嗐6.July 16th Friday rainyThis holiday is my best busy holiday for I am learning English, puter word I fall in the weekend exam. Many times I want to take today off, my mother said to me:鈥済o on, you must belive that you can do it.鈥 So I have to try. Now my English is better than 2months ago. I must thanks my mother, she is good for me. Practices makes perfect.7鏈16鏃 鏄熸湡浜 闃撮洦榪欎釜鍋囨湡鏄鎴戞渶濂界殑綣佸繖鐨勮妭鏃ワ紝鍥犱負鎴戝湪鍛ㄦ湯鑰冭瘯娌¤冨ソ錛屾墍浠ユ垜瀛︿範鑻辮鍜岃＄畻鏈哄崟璇嶃

璁稿氭★紝鎴戞兂鏀懼純浠婂ぉ鐨勫︿範錛屽堝堝規垜璇達細鈥滅戶緇錛屼綘鐩鎬俊浣犺兘鍋氬埌銆"鎵浠ユ垜涓嶈兘涓嶈瘯涓璇曘

鐜板湪鎴戠殑鑻辮姣2涓鏈堝墠濂藉緱澶氥傛垜瑕佹劅璋㈡垜鐨勫堝堬紝濂瑰規垜寰堝ソ銆

瀹炶返鎵嶈兘杈懼埌瀹岀編銆7.July 21th Wednesday rainyGood morning everyone, I have some good news some bad news. The good news is that I have a home page: how happy am I. The bad news is the puter game cd-rom is wrong. I can't play puter game these days. It's the worse for me. Wele to my homepage I wish whom could give me a right cd-rom(you are in sleep).hen hen鈥︹7鏈21鏃 鏄熸湡涓 涓嬮洦 澶у舵棭涓婂ソ錛屾垜鏈変竴浜涘ソ娑堟伅涓浜涘潖娑堟伅銆

濂芥秷鎮鏄錛屾垜鏈変竴涓涓婚〉錛屽氫箞騫哥忓晩銆傚潖娑堟伅鏄鐢佃剳娓告垙鍏夌洏鍑洪敊銆

鎴戜笉鑳界帺鐢佃剳娓告垙錛岃繖浜涘ぉ銆傚お緋熶簡銆

嬈㈣繋鍏変復鎴戠殑涓婚〉甯屾湜璋佽兘緇欐垜涓涓姝ｇ『鐨勫厜鐩橈紙浣犳ｅ湪鐫¤夆︹︼級銆8.July 22th 銆

6. 鑻辮鏃ヨ版牸寮忔庝箞鍐 鏍囧噯鑻辨枃鏃ヨ版牸寮忚寖鏂

鑻辮鏃ヨ版牸寮忕殑鏍囧噯 錛氭棩璁板綋澶╃殑鏃ユ湡浼氬啓鍦ㄥ乏涓婅掞紝鏄熸湡鍜屾椂闂寸殑欏哄簭鍜屾櫘閫氱殑淇′歡涓鑷達紝鍦ㄥ彸涓婅掍細鏍囨敞褰撳ぉ鐨勫ぉ姘旀儏鍐碉紝琛ㄧず鐨勮瘝璇涓鑸涓哄艦瀹硅瘝銆

閫氬父鏉ヨ達紝鍐欐棩璁扮殑鏃墮棿鏄鍦ㄤ笅鍗堛佹櫄涓婏紝鎴栬呭湪絎浜屽ぉ璁板綍鍓嶄竴澶╃殑鏃ヨ幫紝鎵浠ュ湪璁板綍鏃朵細鐢ㄨ繃鍘誨紡鏉ヨ〃紺猴紝浣嗗湪璁板綍澶╂皵鏃舵垨鑰呭皢鏉ヨ佸仛鐨勪簨鎯呮椂錛岄渶瑕佺敤鍒扮幇鍦ㄦ椂鎴栧皢鏉ユ椂錛岃嚦浜庡叾浠栫殑鍐欎綔鏂規硶鍜屼腑鏂囩殑鏃ヨ頒竴鏍楓 鑻辮鏃ヨ版牸寮忕殑鑼冩湰 January 18, 2011 Friday Sunny I'm free now, because I'm in the winter vacation. Although I have some homework, I can finish them in a few days. There's plenty of time to rest and use. My god! After hard study, I have been very tired. In the winter vacation, I want to have enough sleep and a lot of delicious food to reward myself. Last but not least, I will have a good rest. I have rested for a week, then began to feel bored. So I went out with my friends. They are my best friends in the middle school. We didn't go to a special place, we just had lunch together. While we were having lunch, we were still talking about the new school and new friends. One year later, we will bee mature. We will learn more things, get a new life, but we do not have enough time to play, waste and lose. We only have o years. In o years, we will get really for our own life which only belongs to ourselves.璇烽噰綰熾

7. 鑻辨枃鏃ヨ版庝箞鍐欙紙鍐欎綔鏂規硶錛

鏄熸湡鍜屾棩鏈熷啓鍦ㄥ乏涓婅掞紝澶╂皵鍐欏湪鍙充笂瑙

鏃ユ湡鏍煎紡鐢ㄦ湀鏃ュ勾錛堢編寮忥級鎴栨棩鏈堝勾錛堣嫳寮忥級閮藉彲浠

1. 騫淬佹湀銆佹棩閮藉啓鏃訛紝閫氬父浠ユ湀銆佹棩銆佸勾涓洪『搴忥紝鏈堜喚鍙浠ョ緝鍐欙紝鏃ュ拰騫寸敤閫楀彿闅斿紑銆備緥濡傦細December 18, 2003鎴栬匘ec. 18, 2003銆

2. 濡傛灉瑕佸啓鏄熸湡錛屾槦鏈熻佺揣鎸ㄦ棩鏈燂紝瀹冩棦鍙浠ユ斁鍦ㄦ棩鏈熷墠闈錛屼篃鍙浠ユ斁鍦ㄦ棩鏈熷悗闈錛屾槦鏈熶篃鍙浠ョ渷鐣ヤ笉鍐欍傛槦鏈熷拰鏃ユ湡涔嬮棿涓嶇敤鏍囩偣錛屼絾瑕佺┖涓鏍礆紝鏄熸湡涔熷彲緙╁啓銆備緥濡傦細Thursday Dec. 18, 2003鎴朌ec.18,2003 Thursday

3. 澶╂皵鎯呭喌蹇呬笉鍙灝戙傚ぉ姘斾竴鑸鐢ㄤ竴涓褰㈠硅瘝濡傦細Sunny, Fine, Rainy, Snowy絳夎〃紺恆傚ぉ姘旈氬父浣嶄簬鏃ヨ扮殑鍙充笂瑙掋

8. 奼備竴綃囪嫳璇鏃ヨ拌寖鏂

瑕佸﹀ソ鍐欒嫳璇鐭鏂囷紝灝卞繀欏葷粡甯哥粌涔犲啓浣溿

璁版棩璁版槸鎻愰珮涔﹂潰琛ㄨ揪鑳藉姏鐨勬湁鏁堟柟娉曚箣涓銆傛棩璁版槸姣忔棩鐢熸椿鐨勮拌澆錛屾槸涓縐嶈頒簨鏂囦綋銆

涓銆佹棩璁扮殑鏍煎紡 鑻辨枃鏃ヨ伴氬父鐢變功絝鍜屾ｆ枃涓や釜閮ㄥ垎緇勬垚銆傛棩璁板父浠ョ涓浜虹О璁頒笅褰撳ぉ鐢熸椿涓鐨勬墍瑙併佹墍闂匯佹墍鍋氭垨鎵鎯崇殑浜嬫儏銆

涓銆佽嫳鏂囩殑鏃ヨ頒笁鏍煎紡澶ц嚧涓鏍楓傝嫳璇鏃ヨ扮殑涔︾鏄涓撻棬鍐欐棩璁扮殑鏃ユ湡銆佹槦鏈熷拰澶╂皵鐨勩

宸︿笂瑙掓槸鏃ユ湡錛堝勾銆佹湀銆佹棩錛夈佹槦鏈熴傚彸涓婅掑啓涓婂綋澶╃殑澶╂皵鎯呭喌錛屽傦細Sunny, Fine, Rainy, Windy, Snowy, Cloudy絳夈

1銆佹棩鏈熻〃杈炬湁澶氱嶅艦寮忋傚勾銆佹湀銆佹棩閮藉啓鏃訛紝閫氬父浠ユ湀銆佹棩銆佸勾涓洪『搴忥紝鏈堜喚鍙浠ョ緝鍐欙紝鏃ュ拰騫寸敤閫楀彿闅斿紑銆

渚嬪傦細 December 18, 2003 鎴栬 Dec. 18, 2003 A) September 1, 2004鎴朣eptember 1st, 2004涔熷彲鐪佺暐鍐欐垚Sept. 1, 2004鎴朣ept. 1st, 2004;B)the 1st of September in 2004錛堟湀浠戒笉鍙浠ョ緝鍐欙級 B錛夊彧鏈夋湀銆佹棩 September 1鎴朣eptember 1st錛堟湀浠藉彲浠ョ緝鍐欙級 C錛夊彧鏈夊勾銆佹湀 September 2004鎴杢he September of 2004錛堟湀浠戒笉鍙浠ョ緝鍐欙級 浠ヤ笂鐨1鎴1st閮藉簲璇諱綔the first銆 2.鏄熸湡涔熷彲浠ョ渷鐣ヤ笉鍐欙紝鍙灝嗗叾鏀懼湪鏃ユ湡鍓嶆垨鍚庯紝鏄熸湡鍜屾棩鏈熶箣闂翠笉鐢ㄦ爣鐐癸紝浣嗚佺┖涓鏍礆紝鏄熸湡涔熷彲緙╁啓銆

濡傦細 Saturday, October 22nd, 2004;October 22nd, 2004 Saturday 3.澶╂皵鎯呭喌蹇呬笉鍙灝戙傚ぉ姘斾竴鑸鐢ㄤ竴涓褰㈠硅瘝濡 錛歋unny, Fine, Rainy, Snowy 絳夎〃紺恆

鍐欏湪鏃ユ湡涔嬪悗錛岀敤閫楀彿闅斿紑錛屼綅浜庢棩璁扮殑鍙充笂瑙掋傚傦細Saturday, March 4, 2004, Windy;1st January, 2004, Fine 浜屻佹棩璁扮殑瑕佹眰鏃ヨ扮殑姝ｆ枃鏄鏃ヨ扮殑涓昏侀儴鍒嗭紝鍐欏湪鏄熸湡鍜屾棩鏈熺殑姝ｄ笅鏂癸紝鍙浠ラ《鏍煎啓錛屼篃鍙浠ュ唴緙3鑷5涓瀛楁瘝鐨勭┖闂淬

鐢變簬璁拌澆鐨勫唴瀹歸氬父宸茬粡鍙戠敓錛岃皳璇鍔ㄨ瘝澶氱敤涓鑸榪囧幓鏃躲備絾涔熷彲鏍規嵁鍏蜂綋鎯呭喌錛岀敤鍏跺畠鏃舵併

濡傦細璁板彊澶╂皵銆佹弿鍐欐櫙鑹詫紝涓轟簡鎻忓啓鐢熷姩錛屽彲浠ヤ嬌鐢ㄧ幇鍦ㄦ椂錛屼互琛ㄧ幇褰撴椂鐨勬儏鏅銆傚啀濡傛枃鍚庡彂琛ㄦ劅鎯蟲垨璇勮哄彲鐢ㄧ幇鍦ㄦ椂鎬佹垨灝嗘潵鏃舵併

璁版棩璁板姏奼傜畝鍗曟槑浜嗭紝鏈夎繛璐鎬с傝嫢鏈夋枃瀛楁彁紺猴紝鍒欏簲閲嶈嗘彁紺猴紝鎶婃彙瑕佺偣銆

鍦ㄥ彞寮忎笂灝介噺浣跨敤綆鍗曞彞錛屼互闃茬箒鏉傦紝閫犳垚璇娉曘佸彞鍨嬮敊璇銆備笁銆佹棩璁扮殑綾誨瀷鍜岃緇 鏃ヨ板垎涓鴻頒簨鍨嬨佽璁哄瀷銆佹弿鍐欏瀷鍜屾姃鎯呭瀷銆

寤鴻澶у跺湪瀛︿範鍐欐棩璁扮殑榪囩▼涓錛屽彲鎸変互涓嬫ラよ繘琛岋細鈶犲皢涓澶╂墍緇忓巻鐨勪富瑕佷簨鎯呭拰榪囩▼渚濇＄畝瑕佸湴璁頒笅鏉ワ紝涓嶉檮鍔犱換浣曟劅 *** 褰╋紝榪欐槸鏈綆鍗曠殑璁版棩璁扮殑鏂規硶錛涒憽闃呰誨埆浜虹殑鏃ヨ幫紝騫跺埄鐢ㄦ墍瀛﹁繃鐨勫彞鍨嬫潵琛ㄨ揪涓浜哄湪涓澶╀腑瑙傚療鍒扮殑鎴栨劅鍙楀埌鐨勪簨鎯呫 銆愯寖鏂囦笌鐐硅瘎銆慚arch 12th, 2003, TuesdaySunny (Fine) Today is Tree Planting Day. At 7:30 in the morning, all the students in our class met at the school gate. We walked to the park. Miss Gao and other teachers went and worked with us. All the students worked very hard, and we planted about 200 trees. Though we were dirty and tired, we still felt very happy. 榪欐槸涓綃囪板彊鍨嬬殑鏃ヨ般

緇撴瀯涓ヨ皚錛屼腑蹇冪獊鍑猴紝鏈夐夋嫨鍦拌板綍褰撳ぉ鐨勮侀椈錛堜漢鎴栦簨錛夛紝騫跺姞浠ュ垎鏋愬拰璇勮恆 錛堟湜閲囩撼鍝~~~鏂板勾蹇涔愶紒錛侊紒錛夈

㈢ 英語學校旅行日記怎麼寫作文

1. 怎麼用英語寫作文（我在學校的旅行）四年級

Last summer I went to Vietnam with my parents. We stayed at a *** all village outside Saigon. The air and water was very clean and there were many kids playing in the mud along with water buffalos. Though it's a very poor country, the kids seem to be happy. They live with their farmer parents in little houses built with dirt and straw and help out a lot in the rice field ring the day. They don't have TVs or Inter, but they enjoy a lot playing outside. It was a very memorable trip that I will never fet.。

2. 英語作文旅行日記

1、I had a wonderful time in Chongqing this vacation and it was a very happy tour!Chongqing is the biggest municipality directly under the Central Government and bulit on the mountains.The most structure I've seen there is bridge.Chongqing is surrouned by Jialing river and Changjiang river.In order to make life better and more uunicate,several districts of Chongqing are conied by many kinds of bridges of which I don't konw the English name.And the night view of Chongqing is exciting,especially in Jiefangbei.It's so beautiful that I can't describe it in words.To be frank,I dislike the weather in winter of Chongqing.It's so cold that I can't stand.In one word,I spent a unfetable time in Chongqing and I wish I could be there for the second time.

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3. 學校旅遊日記 英語

Travel Diary Thursday August lst Today. It was suuny and hot all day. I went to the palace Museum. It is so long and wide and visited Tian`an Men Square. The Square is very large. There were many people there. I took some photos. Then I went to the Great wall is very long. In the afternoon. I went shopping in a Beijing Hutoing. There are different kind of shops. I bought a pair, of shoes. a jecket and other things. We had Beijing ck for dinner . It was deicious. I love Beijing ck. I was so tired but I felf very happy.Saturday, May 26 Windy Saturday again. How time flies! Another week has gone. This afternoon, I was often absent-minded in class, for I was thinking of the film "The Sound of Music", which would be shown at 7 p.m. on the school playground. As soon as class was over, I hurried out of the classroom. On the way home I saw a little child standing by the roadside crying. Obviously, he had lost his way. Fetting all about the film, I went up to him and asked him to tell me whatever he knew about his family. It took me nearly an hour to send him home. His parents were very glad to find their lost child back and thanked me again and again.。

4. 寫一篇關於自己在學校旅遊的英語作文70~80詞（初一）

Last sunday, my parents and I went to Beijing tour.

In the morning, we take a bus to the Badaling. Imposing Great Wall stretches for thousands of miles, and then boarded the go, feel the ancient wisdom and hard work.

1:30 pm, we had lunch, and then went to the supermarket.

In the evening, happily embark on return journey.

5. 英語寫學校旅行的作文不少於6.詞

Last sunday. I and my father went to jiazhen. In the morning we came down the mountain. I saw wooded mountains, wild flowers bloom. We climb up the hill along the mountain path. Come halfway up the mountain, I feel a little tired,it began to rain,My West Lake silk umbrella missed,. Dad said to me,「bobs, don't do anything halfway.」at last,So I insisted reached the top, the top of the scenery so beautiful.We were flying kites, .finally we went home.finally,Since then, I've kept the umbrella。

i was very happy。

6. 以"旅遊日記"為題目,寫一篇英語作文（翻譯）

Travelling is also one of the best means for learning. You may have read or heard about something but you can never get an accurate picture of it until you see it for yourself. Seeing is believing. Furthermore, if you area careful observer, you can learn much ring your travel about the geography, biology, and history of the places you visit. No matter how well ecated you are, there is always a lot for you to learn through travelling. The knowledge acquired from travel, as you will have found in your life, is no less valuable than that from any influential reference book.

旅行也是最好的學習方法之一。你可能看過或者聽說過某些事物的報道，但只有當你親眼看到這些事物時你才能獲得准確的信息。眼見為實。此外，如果你是一個細心的觀察者，在你的旅行過程中你會學到許多有關當地的地理、生物和歷史方面的知識。不管你接受過多好的教育，通過旅行總是可以讓你學到更多。你會發現在旅行中獲得的知識在你的生活中並不比來自任何一本有影響力的參考書上的價值小。

7. 英語作文《旅行日記》

Transportation: the bus

The departure time: morning 6:40

Arrival time; "

Events: morning, boating, swimming in a *** all restaurant for lunch. Walk along the beach this afternoon to beidaihe photography

Time: 7:30 PM returns

8. 英語作文《旅遊日記》100字左右

Said line to the Wuyi "not beyond the bounds of travel, equal to the white-Tour", is quite true, when my friend and I spent a pedestrian o hours before boarding to make peak travel days, I stood panting peak travel days of the List Pavilion on the lean on a railing around, mountainous Pinnacle, Sen steep rock cliffs, nine winds, the raft light swing, we know the songs Hill Rotary, peak hold water flow, Wuyishan water panoramic view, take a deep breath is open-minded, Tao Ran fet to go home. Xu said: "The river is not temporary but can make nine wins, this peak should be the first solid also," I think it was a very beautiful place Wuyi Mountain, peak travel days when the worthy, and standing on top of the roof the peak, the public view Qishanxiushui indeed together I want to always focussed on landscapes, rivers and lakes hero laughing hazy dream, carrying the body Sword sword, play a "Sword *** an", the greatest human fear is a good thing. From the noisy hustle and bustle of the city, do not think the work boring and sad life of depression, no longer like to sing that song like: "Time seems to rush the work of the machine, so I'm sleepy fatigue strength, can not afford to install happy and cheer, thinking as for the oxygen to breathe. "in the face of nature, is to fake his own, to see mountains and water, green water just singing a song often turn around the Castle 。

。, thinking about tomorrow morning's nine drift , but also filled with infinite yearning. Early the next morning When the morning mist still shrouded peaks, had the cool autumn breeze on the cheek as water, we have lined up riding on a bamboo raft, the long tap Penny boatman, cut the raft head towards me slightly cool water The river winds, can not help but close your eyes and hearts to feel fortable, not the least bit bored and depressed, not how long breathed the fresh air, and the reins are like empty spacious, was washed clean. To hear people say that before the clean water Danxia Wuyishan, the most beautiful to the number of Jiuquxi, if the peak travel days will be steep bold knight of the wind, the water that morning, *** oke Si Wu's nine nine fairy is undoubtedly a soft, bamboo raft down the river, mountains along the water stand, turn the water with the mountains, winding winding nine eighth Bay. Mountains, concealing a paradise, after the hidden bare bamboo Ziyun College, no wonder Guo poem: Limbo Origin of flight feathers light raft, not a poem will do. Raft facing the Autumn, we greet the early autumn air cool earth, in an almost romantic in the front line in Wonderland, a poem, saying: If there are annoying things in mind, is a good time to earth, I think that a good mood If the boating season and I definitely blushed than nine, very close clear stream, looked up and inserted in both sides of the cliffs after thousands of years of wind and sun ring the Guan, and that layers of the mountainous peaks one after another, occult Taoist temple in which we make long home city, really easy to feel relaxed and happy and fortable, this is the real world a good time. One after the o boatmen, while support pole and line, while to us the many beautiful legends about nine, Da Wangfeng Yunufeng beautiful love story and spread through the ages, scholar Zhu Xi, "lost time is never" the writing still vivid in their lovely eyes, every hill, every piece of strange stones according to their shape and by their characteristics, given a proper name of the people wealthy man lay critically, in their vulgar language, although we do not understand a witty sense of humor and warm, amused laughter all the way we constantly wander beeen the nine Bay has been behind the eighth. Looked back at the clear water and blue sky and white to the Castle, the heart no worries worry too clear water, many think that with the raft has been drifting down, happy world is always so short, but I remember the joy of the good treasure in the heart.。

9. 英語作文關於旅遊 寫日記形式的

i love travelling. when i was young, my parents always took me to other places to visit, such as beijing, zhuhai and guilin. but as i grow up, there's such a heavy study-pressure that i can hardly afford time and energy to travel. fortunately, i can 「travel」 to a lot of far-away attractions in the fantastic world of books and tv. recently i have learnt about rio de janeiro from books. i feel excited and want very much to travel there. rio de janeiro lies along the coast of atlantic ocean. it's brazil's second largest city. firstly, i love the climate in rio de janeiro. sea climate is fortable and it never gets too dry or too wet. secondly, i love the beautiful beaches. i always form a picture in my mind of being at the seaside. i imagine myself walking on the beach. the sunshine is mild in the late afternoon and i feel the soft wind moving across my face. i can see the sun moving slowly below the sea level, just like a hot, red ball falling into the water. some seagulls are flying above the sea and others rest themselves on ship-boards. i take off my shoes. soft sand flows through my toes. little waves sometimes run towards me and wet my trousers, just like naughty children. i enjoy this feast for both my body and spirit. now i know that the beauty of nature is the greatest beauty in the world. alone, i'm just walking, walking and walking……。

㈣ 觀察植物日記英語作文五十詞

Plants are very important living things.Life could not go on if there were no plants.This is because plants can make food from air,water and sunlight.Animals and man cannot do so.Animals get their food by eating plants and other animals.Man gets his food by eating plants and animals,too.Therefore,animals and man need plants in order to live.
If you look carefully at the plants around you,you will find that there are many types of plants.Some plants are large while others are small.Most plants are green.

㈤ 英語應用文日記的寫作方法

要學好寫英語短文，就必須經常練習寫作。記 日記 是提高書面表達能力的有效 方法 之一。日記是每日生活的記載，是一種記事文體。接下來，我給大家准備了英語應用文日記的寫作方法,歡迎大家參考與借鑒。

英語應用文日記的寫作方法

一、日記的格式

英文日記通常由書端和正文兩個部分組成。日記常以第一人稱記下當天生活中的所見、所聞、所做或所想的事情。中、英文的日記三格式大致一樣。英語日記的書端是專門寫日記的日期、星期和天氣的。左上角是日期(年、月、日)、星期。右上角寫上當天的天氣情況，如：Sunny, Fine, Rainy3, Windy4, Snowy5, Cloudy等。

1、日期表達有多種形式。年、月、日都寫時，通常以月、日、年為順序，月份可以縮寫，日和年用逗號隔開。例如： December7 18, 2003 或者 Dec. 18, 2003

A) September8 1, 2004或September 1st, 2004也可省略寫成Sept. 1, 2004或Sept. 1st, 2004;B)the 1st of September in 2004(月份不可以縮寫)

B)只有月、日September 1或September 1st(月份可以縮寫)

C)只有年、月September 2004或the September of 2004(月份不可以縮寫)

以上的1或1st都應讀作the first9。

2.星期也可以省略不寫，可將其放在日期前或後，星期和日期之間不用標點，但要空一格，星期也可縮寫。如：

Saturday10, October11 22nd, 2004;October 22nd, 2004 Saturday

3.天氣情況必不可少。天氣一般用一個形容詞如 :Sunny2, Fine, Rainy, Snowy 等表示。寫在日期之後，用逗號隔開，位於日記的右上角。如：

Saturday, March12 4, 2004, Windy;1st January13, 2004, Fine

二、日記的要求

日記的正文是日記的主要部分，寫在星期和日期的正下方，可以頂格寫，也可以內縮3至5個字母的空間。由於記載的內容通常已經發生，謂語動詞多用一般過去時。但也可根據具體情況，用 其它 時態。如：記敘天氣、描寫景色，為了描寫生動，可以使用現在時，以表現當時的情景。再如文後發表感想或評論可用現在時態或將來時態。記日記力求簡單明了，有連貫性。若有文字提示，則應重視提示，把握要點。在句式上盡量使用簡單句，以防繁雜，造 成語 法、句型錯誤。

三、日記的類型和訓練

日記分為記事型、議論型、描寫型和抒情型。建議大家在學習寫日記的過程中，可按以下步驟進行： ①將一天所經歷的主要事情和過程依次簡要地記下來，不附加任何感情色彩，這是最簡單的記日記的方法;

②閱讀別人的日記，並利用所學過的句型來表達個人在一天中觀察到的或感受到的事情。

【 範文 與點評】

March 12th, 2003, TuesdaySunny (Fine)

Today is Tree Planting14 Day. At 7:30 in the morning, all the students15 in our class met16 at the school gate17. We walked to the park. Miss Gao and other teachers went18 and worked19 with us. All the students worked very hard20, and we planted21 about 200 trees. Though22 we were dirty23 and tired24, we still25 felt very happy.

這是一篇記敘型的日記。結構嚴謹，中心突出，有選擇地記錄當天的見聞(人或事)，並加以分析和評論。

擴展：如何寫好中學 英語 作文

寫作在 英語學習 中是培養和提高語言能力的有效手段，它有助於鞏固和掌握所學詞彙、語法等語言知識，有助於訓練直接用所學語言進行思維，有利於提高駕馭語言的能力。中學生該如何寫好英語作文呢●寫作步驟要寫好一篇英語作文，掌握一定的寫作技巧，應把握以下幾個步驟： 1.認真審題立意，定 文章 之靈魂對命題作文必須認真審題，對自由作文必須立好意。 文章要有明確的主題，必須具備4個條件：准確、鮮明、深刻、集中。以本次比賽的命題作文「The English teacher I Admire Most」為例,文章的主題是關於記敘我最欣賞的一位英語老師,因而就不能泛泛談論老師這一職業或自己的幾位老師。2.草擬提綱，打造文章之骨架審好題，立好意後，就要寫提綱，打造文章的骨架。文章布局要做好3件事：安排好層次段落，鋪設好過渡，處理好開頭和結尾。如命題作文中有提示句，還要從提示句的關鍵詞出發，圍繞關鍵詞開拓思路，發揮聯想，記錄下聯想到的東西，可以是 句子 或單詞片語，可以是英語或漢語。仍以「The English Teacher I Admire Most」為例，提綱可以這樣寫: 1)Who is the English teacher I admire most 2) My reasons 3) What can I learn from the teacher 3.寫出落主題句，理文章之脈絡一篇短文的段落一般分為引導段、主題段和結尾段。每段的主題句非常重要，是作者思維的起點，切題的准繩，闡述的對象。看到段落主題句，讀者大致了解段落要闡述的內容。段落主題句通常是一個語法結構完整、內容概括、用詞簡潔明了的單句。通常將段落主題句置於段落的開頭，可使文章結構更清晰，有說服力。4.參照提綱，緊扣主題句，完成各段落，充文章之血肉有了段落主題句後，還需要順著段落主題句的方向，參照提綱中的思路，從而完成各個段落。引導段要能引起讀者的注意和興趣，為主題段鋪路架橋。主題段應圍繞文章和該段的主題來展開。展開的方式包括：順序法、舉例法、比較法、對比法、說明法、因果法、推導法、歸納法，和下定義等。可以根據需要任選一種或幾種方式。還是以「The English Teacher I Admire Most」為例，主題段中就能用到舉例法、說明法、因果法等。進行這一步驟還需注意三方面問題：1)確保提綱中段落結構的思路與各段主題句的一致性。只有這樣，才能保證所寫段落不偏題，不跑題。2)要綜合考慮各個段落的內容安排，避免段落內容的交叉。3)用好連接詞，注意段落間、句子間的連貫性。要做到所寫文章層次分明，思路清晰，文字連貫，就需要在句與句之間，段與段之間架起一座座橋梁，而連接詞起的正是橋梁作用。●增加文采小竅門如果說第一、二步是對文章的構思，第三、四步驟則是真正地「寫」了，用詞是否貼切，文法是否正確，句式是否多變，文采是否有生氣，關繫到寫作者的語言功底和水平，但也有些竅門，以下這幾點可以供你參考。1.在整篇文章中，避免只是用一兩個句式，要靈活運用各種句式。如倒裝句、強調句、省略句、主從復合句、對比句、分詞 短語 、介詞短語等。2.使用不同長度的句子，通過分句和合句，增強句子的連貫性和表現力。3.改變句子的開頭方式，不要一味以主、謂、賓、狀的次序。可以把狀語置於句首，或用分詞短語等。4.學會使用過渡詞。如：1)遞進：further more, moreover, besides, in addition, thenetc. 2)轉折：however, but, nevertheless, afteralletc. 3) 總結 ：finally, atlast, inbrief, toconclude 4)強調：really, indeed, certainly, surely, abovealletc. 5)對比：in the same way, justas, on the other hand,etc. 5.避免重復使用同一單詞或片語。6.注意運用固定片語、習語、 諺語 來代替一些詞表達意思，以增加文采。●把好檢查最後一關1.是否切題分三點看：一是整篇文章內容是否切合文章標題要求;二是段落主題句的內容是否與各段落提示句內容相一致;三是段落內部的內容是否與段落主題句的表達相一致。如果發現任何一個層面不切題，應該盡可能彌補，刪除那些多餘的或不切題的地方，但切忌動「大手術」。2.是否連貫檢查上下文是否連貫，句子銜接是否自然流暢，檢驗的標准主要是句子是否通暢，該用連詞的地方用了沒有，所用的連詞是否合適。3.是否有語法錯誤主謂是否一致，動詞的時態、語態、語氣的使用是否正確，片語的搭配是否合乎習慣。還是以「The English Teacher I Admire Most」為例，根據此標題，文章肯定用第一人稱「I」寫，一般性的描述用現在時，舉過去的事例用過去時。