請自己修改自己的作文英語怎麼說

1. 以 我將怎樣改變自己 為題的英語作文

To begin with, I 'd admit that I have heard too much about "Never Give Up" and I am strongly opposed to this idea.

People like to take these 3 words as their motto when they are determined to do sth. As a metter of fect, nobody knows how long and how much should the aim cost you. If you insisted in one aim, your should find your energy being drained. Yet your success not come. What's more, things are always changing faster than you expect, consequently, your aim should be fixed accordingly. Give up one thing could benifit you more at another points. In addition, one's aim could be easily set far beyond one's ability, especially when he thinks "Never give up" means success.

To sum up, holding the idea "Never Give Up" is really unwise. Not only can it drain your energy, but make you miss other benifits as well. Therefore, my suggestion is you give up sometimes.

2. 自己如何修改自己的英語作文或如何提高自己的寫作水平謝謝

Read more and write more! You need time to improve.Do it!

3. 自己如何修改自己的英語作文或如何提高自己的寫作水平謝謝

換用一些不同句子結構或者更高級的單詞和短語,慢慢改寫吧.提高寫作內水平可以每天用英容文寫日記,或者練練英語範文然後給老師評改,慢慢提升自己,然後把好的範文背下來,就自然有感覺了,慢慢培養語感就ok 了.希望有所幫助.加油哦!

4. 這篇英語作文是自己寫的，請修改，很感謝！

Liu Xiang is a Chinese 110 metre hurdler.He was born on 13 July,1983 in Shanghai .He began to train 110 metre hurdles in 1998. He is a Chinese hero.There is no one in Asia who got a gold medal of men's 110 metre hurdles in Olympics before 2004, but Liu Xiang got it in 2004. This is just a beginning for him. Liu Xiang broke the world record which he and Colin Jackson from England both kept it with the time of 12.88 in IAAF Super Grand Prix in Switzerland Lausanne in 2006.
So great he is! am so proud of him! Cheer up,Liu Xiang!

5. 英語作文改變自己

改變自己英語作文一：Changing Ourselves

From my point of view, we should change ourselves when the situation can』t be changed any more. Difficulties hide in every corner of our life so we have to face them at times. But the problem is that we sometimes are not able to change the challenging situations at all as our abilities are limited. When it comes, we』d better change our attitude towards these difficulties. Only in this way can we get rid of the tough surroundings and be happy.

Something like that happened to me once. There was a time when I was laughed at by my classmates while I was walking. I was puzzled so I asked them why they laughed at me. One of them told me that the way I walked was very strange and funny. I was sad but I just couldn』t change the way I walked. And the situation of being laughed at by those people didn』t stop. Therefore, I changed my attitude towards the incident. I ignored those comments on me and walked as I used to. The comments soon disappeared and I was so glad to have succeeded in the quiet war.

So in my opinion, we should change ourselves first and then the situation can be changed at last. It is very difficult for us to change our surroundings but much easier to change ourselves. People around us will see our change, after which they may change their attitude toward us.

改變自己英語作文二：Changing Ourselves

Change is indispensable to life a action, perhaps, you will change their career, maybe you『ll change your status, but whatever oneself forever is the most important.

Change, can make you more harmonious and his colleagues, can make you look more excellent, can make other people to you is very satisfied, can make you more up a level! Change, is the best choice.

A young man came to work in a company, at first he hold all kinds of lofty goals want to do a great business, but then he found; The company all the way up and out, as in his he is like air, invisible, and generally feel it, as does not exist generally...... Various pressures and prompted him to want to dissatisfaction with another company to begin his work, the new journey, but a best friends said to him, "now find a proper job is not easy, why don『t you look at yourself, then decide?" He embraced the idea of try stayed. Indeed he found, his own performance is not outstanding, the attitude is not friendly to colleagues, to work isn『t aggressive enough... Finally he a rude awakening, after that, he became more friendly, active, work hard...... Also no longer as usual go it alone, when he again meet the best friends, the young man has been promoted as a manager.

Change yourself, change is successful state before, try to change their shortcomings, will give you a brilliant!!!!! Once, in near the exam in a week for several times, test, I lost, in the heart a remorseful, feel that they couldn『t save good grades, is change reminds me, make me change the learning methods, won the final victory.

Change your, make oneself more outstanding, more perfect, let life shine for change.

改變自己英語作文三： Ourselves

"The objective conditions is not changed, can only change yourself." See this sentence, I recognized that is the truth. As a junior high school student learning is a top priority. But I give parents play has made a lot of trouble. Deal with the books all day, but the play is necessary, I will persist. The ancients cloud: fish and bear's paw cake and have it. But I don't believe the truth is, I will try to thank. Fish and bear's paw to all my bag! I want to learn to play and don't give up. But this time I again wrong, don't learn together, playing a hope. In these circumstances, I chose one, I began to study the change and become a good study darling female. In my eyes, you are learning the gold medal, in order to you, I change yourself! To the moon and stars twinkling in the sun and the moon, the clouds hide themselves, to cover themselves, and to rain clouds and show myself to the earth, and bury themselves raindrops, and you? You have to change your own? For you,

I still to change myself...

改變自己英語作文四：Changing Ourselves

Change is indispensable to life a action, perhaps, you will change their career, maybe you『ll change your status, but whatever oneself forever is the most important.

Change, can make you more harmonious and his colleagues, can make you look more excellent, can make other people to you is very satisfied, can make you more up a level! Change, is the best choice.

A young man came to work in a company, at first he hold all kinds of lofty goals want to do a great business, but then he found; The company all the way up and out, as in his he is like air, invisible, and generally feel it, as does not exist generally...... Various pressures and prompted him to want to dissatisfaction with another company to begin his work, the new journey, but a best friends said to him, ""now find a proper job is not easy, why don『t you look at yourself, then decide?"" He embraced the idea of try stayed. Indeed he found, his own performance is not outstanding, the attitude is not friendly to colleagues, to work isn『t aggressive enough... Finally he a rude awakening, after that, he became more friendly, active, work hard...... Also no longer as usual go it alone, when he again meet the best friends, the young man has been promoted as a manager.

Change yourself, change is successful state before, try to change their shortcomings, will give you a brilliant!!!!! Once, in near the exam in a week for several times, test, I lost, in the heart a remorseful, feel that they couldn『t save good grades, is change reminds me, make me change the learning methods, won the final victory.

Change your, make oneself more outstanding, more perfect, let life shine for change.

改變自己英語作文五：Changing Ourselves

Things in the world are changing.

People are changing and every creature is changing. Changing is a neutral word. We can』t judge it is good or bad in general, because every coin has two sides. But sometimes we need to change, because it is good for us. Sometimes we will meet some difficult or uncomfortable situation. When we are not able to change it, we need to change ourselves. If both of us refuse to budge, the problem would not be solved. Sometimes we need to change our life attitude; sometimes we need to change our views of seeing things; sometimes we need to tolerant; sometimes we need to be strong.

Changing ourselves according to the specific situation is good for us.

6. 請英語高手幫我修改一下我的作文

你好，我也是閃電狗的愛好者，但我也只是個學生，可能我還不能向老師一樣為你指出錯誤，但是我認為有些句子這樣修改可能更好，你可以參考一下。
標題：Disney』s first CG movie--Bolt
1. Bolt is an American white shepherd, who plays a heroic dog in a TV show and has some trouble in recognizing that he doesn't have superpowers.
修改為：Bolt,a white American shepherd,played a heroic dog in a TV show and had some trouble in recognizing that he didn't have superpowers.
2.he understood that he didn』t have superpower and the show is not real.
修改為:he realized that he didn』t have any superpower.Furthermore,the show he has played a super dog was not real.
3.Finally, Bolt, Mittens and Rhino live a happy with Bolt』s person.
修改為:Finally, Bolt ,with Mittens and Rhino ,lived a happy life with penny's family.
4.I really like these three animals, because they are so lovely, clever and brave. There is a classic dialogues,
修改為:I really admire these three animals with their cuteness,cleverness,braveness
5.There is a classic dialogues,
修改為:Following are some classic dialogues:
6.He realizes he is a superdog that can always protect his person with his superpower. (這句和上文的邏輯聯系不太緊密)
修改為:He had thought he was a superdog and naturely could protect his master with his superpower.

恩,有些語法錯誤,前後時態要一致,句式最好豐富些，多用用關聯詞．
我修改了一下，希望大番薯和小地瓜可以評論下，好讓我進行修改．
Disney』s first CG movie--Bolt
－－Do you know a superdog named Bolt? Bolt is the story of a Hollywood dog who is the star of the most popular show centering around his adventures saving his owner Penny from the evil Green Eyed Man.
－－unfortunately,The great hero,bolt, had thought he was a superdog and naturely could protect his master with his superpower.
One day he separated from the studio by accident,Bolt thought he must find a way back to Hollywood to save Penny. On his long way home, he met a female cat named Mittens.Then,a hamster,in a plastic ball,named Rhino joined their adventure.As Bolt Graally came to the realization that he didn』t have any superpower.Furthermore,the show he has played a super dog was not real. Though Bolt had been in the sense of loss, with the help of the cat and hamster, Bolt went back at last.Finally,his owener,penny was surrounded by dangers, Bolt never lost his balance and saved her.At the end of the film,to our gladness, Bolt ,with Mittens and Rhino ,lived a happy life with penny's family.
－－I really admire these three animals with their cuteness,clverness,braveness and loyalism.Following are some classic dialogues:Bolt：「There will be danger.」

Rhino：「I eat danger for breakfast！」

Bolt：「Are you hungry？」

Rhino：「Starving！」
That』s right. We shouldn』t be scared of danger.
花了我一個多小時．．．
最後，歡迎到閃電狗來，有問題我為您解答．

7. 急!!!請各位英語高手來修改一下我的作文.

or改成and program變成復數
need to speak fluently and to possess wide knowledge.

The most important thing
don't have to rely on pictures or other medias,but only their voice.
However,(逗號要得）TV hosts don't need to worry about that a lot,because they have lots of ways to convey their thought.
Both radio hosts and .........

8. 自己如何修改自己的英語作文或如何提高自己的寫作水平謝謝

換用一些不同句子結構或者更高級的單詞和短語，慢慢改寫吧。提高寫作回水平可以每答天用英文寫日記，或者練練英語範文然後給老師評改，慢慢提升自己，然後把好的範文背下來，就自然有感覺了，慢慢培養語感就ok 了。希望有所幫助。加油哦！

9. 請幫我修改一下英語作文

錯誤如圖片所列：

10. 我想改變自己英語作文

"The objective conditions is not changed, can only change yourself." See this sentence, I recognized that is the truth. As a junior high school student learning is a top priority. But I give parents play has made a lot of trouble. Deal with the books all day, but the play is necessary, I will persist. The ancients cloud: fish and bear's paw cake and have it. But I don't believe the truth is, I will try to thank. Fish and bear's paw to all my bag! I want to learn to play and don't give up. But this time I again wrong, don't learn together, playing a hope. In these circumstances, I chose one, I began to study the change and become a good study darling female. In my eyes, you are learning the gold medal, in order to you, I change yourself! To the moon and stars twinkling in the sun and the moon, the clouds hide themselves, to cover themselves, and to rain clouds and show myself to the earth, and bury themselves raindrops, and you? You have to change your own? For you, I still to change myself...客觀條件是不可改變的，能改變的只有自己。」看到這句話時，我認定了這是真理。 身為一名初中生，學習是首要任務。但貪玩的我給父母製造了不少麻煩。整天與書本打交道是必不可少的，但玩我也要堅持到底。古人雲：魚和熊掌不可兼得。但我不信這是真理，我到偏偏要試一試。魚和熊掌我要全包！就與我要學習且不放棄玩一樣。但這次我又錯了，學習沒弄好，玩也沒了指望。在這種環境下，我選擇了其中一樣——學習，我開始努力的改變，變成一個好好學習的乖乖女。 學習，你是我眼中的金牌，為了你，我改變自己！ 星星為了月亮而閃爍自己，月亮為了太陽而隱藏自己，太陽為了烏雲而遮掩自己，烏雲為了雨滴而展現自己，雨滴為了大地而埋沒自己，而你呢？你曾為了你的你而改變過自己嗎？ 為了你，我仍努力的改變自己……